You render your pneuma’s vista,
Panoramic and deep,
like a mirage beyond anyone’s reach.
And your thoughts,
untouched and pure,
like the early morning dew reposing on a faraway hill.
You are fierce like the deep blue ocean,
Calm like the snow-clad Alps,
Free like the soaring eagle,
And bold like some gushing gale.
You are the oasis in a rugged terrain,
Fragrance of some flowery bloom,
The hope of a better tomorrow,
And brightness in any dreadful gloom.
And with a soul so brave,
You touch me in many ways.
Copyright © Shantanu Baruah
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This touches me – you write beautifully sir!
Thank you so much for your kind words. Much appreciate you reading and commenting
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This is so beautiful.The beautiful metaphors you have used to compare a person’s impression is commendable.
This calls for a reblog.
Reblogged this on Megha's World and commented:
Come read Shantanu’s lyrical metaphors of a loving touch.Needless to say, his poetry touches me in many ways.
Thank you so much Megha for your kind words 😊
Thank you Megha. Appreciate your kind words
My pleasure.You have written it so beautifully.I’m saving it in my blog.(secret behind my reblogs)
You are most welcome.
That is really sweet of you. Thank you
Who knows how longer this writing streak lasts.Need to savor the beauties.
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if you keep sending me flower it will never end..haha
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Thanks for the reblog