The other day I met someone
with your name
and all those suppressed emotions,
and disparage thoughts
came rummaging
through my bellowing chest,
escaping my vulnerable eyes,
displaying many shades of hue,
some turquoise,
few cerulean and
some blue,
exposing me to a point
where I was naked
my wounds afresh
and I stood there helpless
drenched in your sweet pain
Copyright Β© Shantanu Baruah
Wow. This is deep
Thank you so much Vikram. Appreciate your kind words
Wonderful piece. Great work my friend.
Thank you so much. Appreciate your kind words
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Plz plz plz write something I don’t like, just for a changeπ
tortured but beautifully crafted!
Believe me, when I say that a name has more power to it, when it resonates in the deep corners of your soul than the physical presence.
This is my favourite one from you. π
Thank you so much. Appreciate you reading and commenting. π
Yes, absolutely true. Thanks for reading
Thank you so much π
Haha thanks so much for lovely comment
My pleasure, Shantanu.
Beautifully penned! π
Thank you so much. Appreciate your comment
Yup, yes, that’s exactly what happens! Finally someone put it into words!! I thank you for that. Wonderful piece, fantastically penned! Love it
Thank you so much Ana. You need to experience it to believe it. Thank you for your lovely words π
my pleasure π
just awesome now I am also willing to become a poet !
Thank you. That is such a sweet comment. Welcome to the club π
Interesting!
Thank you so much for stopping by ππΈ
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