I unearthed her slowly one layer at a time,
exposing her dormant emotions,
one sense at a time
Like a skilled craftsman,
I abraded the masks she wore,
made her stand naked,
with her soul exposed
A sense of victory
crossed my evil eyes,
a dancing smirk graced my lips
spilling venom laced briers
My time of avenge had finally come
I desired to abandon her
and mock her like she once performed
But then I committed a mistake
that I should have never done
I looked at her eyes
and I all my hatred was gone
For this time those eyes had
bellowing love for me,
the eyes showed my reflection,
which I couldn’t reckon
And I surrendered my life
in the capture of her eyes,
for those doe-shaped eyes
now would never lie
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Intense. A turnover at the end. Good one.
Outstanding piece! Fasntastically written!
Wow. I can’t breathe.
Wow
Thank you so much, Adithya
Thank you so much, Ana
Thank you so much. Ayush
Well eyes never lie, so it must be he truth that you fell for.
A lovely write up indeed.
Thank you so much Moushmi
Damn!❤️
Thank you so much Devika 🤗🌸
Well, eyes are one’s window to the soul and once it captures you, it takes you whole.I loved the way you have started the poem and the twist you have given in the end.
Thank you for your deep read and lovely words
My pleasure.You writing brings out the deepness.
Thank you 🤗
Aha my hug.
😊
This is a very powerful poem. The descriptions are great. Another favorite. -Jill
Thank you, Jill. Appreciate all your love for my work 🌸
You are welcome. One of the joys of the internet is connecting with people and their art and creativity. I am grateful for connecting with your creative voice.
Thank you, Jill. Your words means a lot and the feeling is mutual
Thank you.
Outstanding piece my friend!
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