First, I was bereaved,
and I pleaded her to speak
Then I was torn,
for her quietness was like a storm,
and before I could comprehend
I realized my world was coming to an end
Your assumed silence,
your indifferent stature,
your unperturbed stillness,
and the uproar in your calmness,
all staring my stupor soul,
as if a tangent was drawn
between our world
The ravine has a rage,
I tried to escape,
but was caught in a cage,
I screamed without a voice,
I wailed without a noise,
and like a fool,
I held to her imaginary dangling thread,
trying to find the end
in some labyrinth descend
She witnessed the turmoil
Yet she chose not to speak
for she was long gone from the world,
yes, she had deceased,
but his heart refused to let her go
and kept searching her
in some meaningless abyss
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Some hearts don’t heal……
Anguish and pain well expressed.๐
Wow. Intense emotions of separation through death. Beautifully and eloquently expressed
Nicely written!โบ
Wow! Wow! Wow! *clapping of hands*
You expressed pain so beautifully here !
I just loved it ! ๐
That gave me goosebumps ๐๐๐
Thank you so much Yasmin. I am glad you could feel it โค๏ธ
My pleasure Shantanuโฃ
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Thank you so much
Thank you so much Tammy
Thank you so much
Thank you so much for your kind words
This is wonderful
Thank you so much, Kelley
Its always a pleasure !
Loved it! Beautiful!โค
Thank you so much Richa โค๏ธ
Your welcome
I can feel the pain and anguish of holding on to the relationship which is long dead.
How we hold to the last scraps of relationship hoping to turn better.Very nicely expressed Shantanu
Thank you so much for your kind words, Megha. Always beautiful
such lovely expressions..esp liked unperturbed stillness and uproar in your calmness…
Thank you Geetika. Appreciate your lovely comment
welcome…
From being alive to her death you seem so shocked and worried about your own life coming to an end. She was the one who left this earth. You use incredible methods to show how hurt and lost you feel. Great writing again Shantanu !
Heartbreaking.
Thanks for your comment.
Thank you so much, James. Your thought is really well written
You are welcome.
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Understanding piece!
Thanks a lot Warren
You’re welcome! ๐
Wen our hearts open out of darkness it creates the finest ray of light โค๏ธ
Beautiful put Nimra. Thanks for your lovely comment
Heartbreaking yet beautiful!
Thanks Ana. How was exam
My pleasure! Exam is done, perhaps not as good as I wanted it to be but it’s done now and I can finally relax! Thank you for asking!! ๐
Great have fun. I am sure you will do well
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