Why did you vanish,
without announcing and quietly
tip toeing with bare feet
leaving behind your obnoxious thoughts,
for my defiant mind to keep
And no matter how much I abstain,
you unceremoniously revisit,
encroaching every moment,
invading every space,
turning me insane
and leaving me entwined
in a labyrinth of hopeless deceive
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Heartbreaking 😞💔
It’s awesome…..love it’s flow.
Sad but still beautiful…
Xoxo
she walked normally right in front of you. She must have trampled your feelings into ashes. She was not the right fit with you I can admit maybe ? Great way of creating such thrilling deep poems Shantanu !!
I wonder if a day would come when people could read other’s mind..You will be my first choice…How ??? From Where these thoughts are born???? You think too much or what??
You write beautiful…
very good! ❤
Wonderful👌very deep and catchy❤
Thank you so much for your read and comment
Thank you so much
Thank you so much, Deepanwita
That is really sweet of you to say. You are very kind with your words. ❤️
Thank you so much James for your analysis and comment.
Thank you so much, Tracy
Thank you so much l, Sakshi
Thanks for reading and commenting, Yasmin
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Oh that terrible thing called deceit. So sad
I wonder if you have learnt psychology🤔
My pleasure always😊
I wrote the same thing a few minutes ago 😊🌸
Haha I have not. Life teaches you a lot of things. You don’t have to go to school 😊
Thanks for commenting 😊
You are welcome.
Oh yes😄
Haha
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Agreed👍
Kya kya sabak Sikha diye zindagi ne
Dardon ko janane mein tujhe Aamil kar diya
Wow what words. You are too good
Aapse Sikh rahi hu Sir😊
Now that is absolutely not the case. You are very good with words
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Heartbreaking and very poignant
That’s so heart-wrenching, yet so beautiful !
I’m just amazed !
Thank you so much
Thank you so much Megha
My pleasure ! 🙂
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Invasion of thoughts by the one who breaks the heart can be torturous. Well penned.
Thank you so much. Very well said
Pleasure indeed and thank you.
Beautiful poetry. I can sense the essence of your soul, friend.
I’m not sure I would want to. I thought about this, but it would be exhausting knowing all of those secrets! I don’t think I could handle it.
Understand you ping Neal. Thanks for commenting
Thank you so much, Neal. Thanks for the follow.
Ohh😉 I completely do agree…
😊there is nothing wrong with your thought too. It was your perspective 🌸💛
Nice piece!
Thanks for reading Warren
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