You are like that song,
lingeringย to a point of annoyance,
Yet hard to abstain.
the tuneย glued permanently in my head,
No matter how hard I try,
The words fail to recollect,
And more I want to push it away,
It escalates with further vigor,
growing on me as the time advance.
And then after some time I recall the words,
the rhyme, the tune โ displaying urgency it surges,
I sing it loud,
I hum it all day long,
With the hope that neither the syllable nor you will fail me this time around.
Copyright ยฉ Shantanu Baruah
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Thank you ๐
Beautiful.๐ธ I really like the way you present each poem๐
Thank you so much Sameera. Appreciate your kind words
You amazes me every time.
Thank you so much for your kind words
I am so used to read such amazing poems. I am waiting for one bad poem๐๐คฃ (on a light note)
You are two sweet jay ๐ธ
Haha…nooooooo i am not
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Some people they stick in the head on a continuous repeat track or like a broken record.
So true. ๐thanks for commenting
Pleasure always๐
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Oh my..I have been through this feeling a lot..I loved you used this as a metaphor to describe someone who just keeps lingering in our thoughts
Thanks a lot Megha. Means a lot coming from the metaphor queen ๐
haha..metaphor queen..I’ll take it as compliment coming from the king of beautiful words.
Aww. Th are too kind. But you are a metaphor queen. I meant it ๐
Believe me, I know no other way to write abt it. it feels so refreshing to read different poets rendering the same emotions in such different ways.
Always. I also admire how in the world we can write about love in zillion different ways ๐
Yes..that proves it to be a wonderful and such a beautiful feeling..no amount of poems can cover its vastness.
Well said miss
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Wow …such a beautiful use of metaphor. Kudos for this one . Brilliant writing
Wise words๐
Thank you so much
Thank you so much for your read and comment
You are welcome sir.๐๐
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Like the last two lines very much ! ๐
Totally love โค๏ธ
Thank you so much Tanya
Yes it is ๐๐ธ
Annoyance, you bet!
Thanks a lot Myth.
Hope keeps us alive.
Nice!
Yes, thank you for your read and comment
Thank you Warren
The pleasure is mine.
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