He ignored the beaconing voice
so many times in the past,
the bellowing raucous noise
inside his defiant heart
He denounced the imprints
cast on his mind,
as if she was an inscribed
engraved on sand never to last
But the gyration of the wilderness
captivated in some puerile trice,
the laughter, the guffaws flared up,
and every time he tried to touch
it disappeared as if it was a disguise
He became a peripatetic,
to avoid the reeking pain
he wandered to faraway places,
but it was all in vain
for she followed him through all the paths
He pretended forgetfulness,
put his heart on new interests,
but it never helped,
and he longed to have some momentary respite
Disdain he surrendered to his fate,
came to terms with the emotional spate,
he lived a platonic life
dangling on a thin rope
and she stayed in concealment
between shadows, enchanted hopes and blurred trite
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Masterfully penned, my friend; masterfully penned!
You are too kind. Thank you Warren
Very much my pleasure to read!
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Grounds for believing that something good may happen…is the biggest anticipation for a soul.
Bound to say…You have distinct meaningful element of speech and writing๐๐๐๐that fondle one’s heart n soul.
I second Warren. This is masterfully penned. From start to end, it binds me and connect me with the man and his pain.โค๏ธ
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You guys are too sweet. Thank you Sameera. I truly appreciate such kind appreciation and encouragements. โค๏ธ
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Your writing are worth every appreciation.๐ผ Pleasure is all mine.
Thank you Sameera. This really means a lot to me Sameera โค๏ธ๐ค
This is amazing!!!
The struggle ,the agony can be felt.Beautifully penned Shantanu๐๐๐
engraved on sand never to last….๐
So good with words Shantanu, perfect
Perfection….. sheer perfection.๐ I could feel the emotion behind it. ๐๐
You just weave every emotion in words so perfectly, i get mesmerised every single time a read your words !
Beautiful is the word ! โค
You are so kind. Thank you for your kind read and beautiful words โค๏ธ
Thank you so much Sakshi. Appreciate your kind words
It is always a pleasure to read them, always ! ๐
Thank our so much Yasmin
Thank you so much Jaya
Thanks a lot Reina
Thanks a lot my friend. Means a lot ๐
Brilliant execution.I can feel the restlessness and the yeraning of our heart which makes us do things to keep us busy.But we fail miserably if don’t have control on our emotions.
I don’t know I’m right or not but certain verses of this poem reflects you closely.
Thank you for your beautiful comment. Thanks for reading ๐๐ธ
You didn’t answer my question?
You wonโt give up will you ๐ let it be my abstruseness for the world to perceive ๐๐ธ
hehe..You know me..Kahan maanoogi itne aaram se.
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Outstanding piece! Your writing is something quite special, Shantanu
You are so very kind Ana. Thank you
A lost love really hurts. right sir?
Always ๐
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This is a brilliant piece, Shantanu. Never seeing this piece, yet it speaks. So many shades, very expressive imageries.
It seems he is trapped between the heart with such restlessness, in an an attempt to forget. Plagued by fear of truly releasing the heart to experience a love untapped.
No longer at ease with the usual routine.
Even in an attempt of selective memory and thoughts of forgetfulness.
The reeking pain that comes is like a cutting of the heart from your own.
Emotions have succumb.
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Wow. Your analysis amazes me every time. I canโt thank you enough for reading my work so beautifully โค๏ธ
You are are very welcome! ๐๐ธHumbled ๐
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this read like a beautiful story of lost love……….i could feel his sadness and longing in your words.
Thanks so much dear, Wendi. Much appreciate your kind read ๐ธ๐ธ
my pleasure! ๐
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