The flowing hair,
The glowing face,
The smile floating like a blissful grace.
The meandering talks,
The shining eyes,
The insane labyrinth of some dwam in disguise.
I sat there agape,
Lost in that trice,
How I wished the moment to freeze for some more time.
The heart oscillated like it had never before,
And the world felt like there was nothing else to behold,
I do not know how to explain,
Unsure whether I should give it a name,
Some call it love and others think it’s inane,
Some brand it,
Others label it,
And few might brandish the thought.
But for me, it was a trance,
a stupor,
an occult,
Hard to express in mere words.
Copyright © Shantanu Baruah
Beautiful Shantanu! That moment is so ecstatic, when the world around you stands still and you are lost in her bewitching beauty!
Thank you so much for your kind words Radhika. You said it so beautifully
Nicely penned with lovely rhyming words that embrace such a beautiful moment.
Thank you so much for your kind words
My pleasure.
Aha..the trance this beautiful love puts us in.Beautifully expressed , Shantanu
Thanks a lot for your kind words 😊🌸
This is definitely a personal experience..I can tell.
There has to be something some where to inspire you. Even if it so your own mind creation 😊
You are lucky enough to have all these experiences and then creative enough to pen them.
You are too kind. You also do the same. If you have not realized 😊
Oh I do my friend..realization has to be there to write from the heart.Well, you know that already.
Absolutely and well said
Aww! So romantic! When will someone write like this for me and mean it? This is absolutely adorable. Love it
I am sure there is someone there if not in words for sure in there eyes and you can take this poem the verses. Thanks for your comment
Thank you for your sweet words.
Always my pleasure 😊
😍
💛
………….just lovely.
Thank you so much Wendi
Like always, you left me amazed ❣️
Thank you so much Jaya for your kindness ❤️
No , don’t give me any credit. It’s your great work which earned the words from me 💕
😊🌸💛
I love how you say “Some call it love and others think it’s inane.” I feel like it’s really accurate. I found this excellent.
Nice one..👍👍
Thank you so much for your kind words. Appreciate you reading my work and giving such lovely comment
Thank you so much Manish
My pleasure 😊😊
😊🌸
Ye tu nahi ,yeh toh tera Ishq likhta hain
Tere har lafz mein Mehboob ka chehra dikhta hain💕💕💕
Yasmin ❤️thank you for sharing your beautiful words in my comment section. Truly honored 🌸😊
I can’t help it S😄
Whenever I read such beautiful words I respond this way☺
I am short of adjectives for your poems now 💜💜💜
Beautiful,Awesome,Amazing etc etc words fall short for what you write.
And I am so jealous of your “her”(cant blame me,I guess every girl here is😅)
Koi toh mere liye itni sundar kavita likh do plz🤦♀️😄
You are so sweet. I am also out of words to thank you. Really thank you for all the love and encouragement. On your last part I am only smiles 😊🌸you have such a nice way to say everything 💛😊
You deserve every bit of appreciation and much more than this.Its my pleasure to read you💜😊🤗
The feeling is mutual Yasmin. When I read your work I transpose to a different world. You are too good in Urdu shayari. Something I can only wish to write 💛😊
I am honored.These words coming from you means a lot☺🌼
And I mean every word. I always wanted to write in Urdu but my vocab defeats me. You writing in Urdu is beyond beautiful 🌸
😊💖
Romantic and lovely! 🙂
Thank you so much Frances
It is a pleasure to read your words!
Adorable, romantic and what a beautiful moment.❤️
Thank you Sameera ❤️
The feeling is mutual ❤️🌸thank yuv
I want to see her too😬
This makes me happy! Thank you ❤
You are welcome ❤️
Haha. Remember she is an occult 😊
Aaahhhh…!!!!
Thanks 😊
With Mrs. Shantanu in mind huh 😛
Lol. 😊🌸
Wow….. splendid.. . magical…. beautiful…..and I don’t know what else to say.😊
Thank you so much Sakshi. I really appreciate it
😊🤗☺️
It sure is, but you do it beautifully!
Thank you so much Warren
Beautiful!
Thank you Sophia
And that is I guess called sank in love 😛
Yeah 😊🌸