Her eyes,
a universe on its own
consuming the galaxies
and the celestial bodies within
The bewildered vastness,
and the ravine depth,
which has no boundaries,
and every time he submerged
in its vicious trance,
he goes through a complex labyrinth,
floating in infinity,
falling into some abyss of the unknown
Drawn, awestruck and madly in love,
and like a wanderer,
he searches for moments to behold
and when he has such abstruseness in sight
why does he need worldly pleasures to get high
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Eyes, they speak
the perfect reflection of their heart and soul !
And your words have described ‘her eyes’ so beautifully, that makes them even more special and expressive !
Your words have expressed the expressions of ‘her eyes’ ! π
Simply perfect ! π
Thank you so much for your such a beautiful comment. I will treasure them all ππΈ
I donβt know who inspires you βΊοΈbut each word echoes perfectly beautiful πππΌππ»
You are so sweet. Thank you for such lovely comment πΈπ
Your poetry is beautifully expressed. Love this! π
Thank you so much. Much appreciate your lovely comment
My pleasure βΊοΈππΌ
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My goodness π
Who the hell is doing this to youπ
Thank you Jay π
Lol haha
It was a sheer pleasure ! I really loved the way you’ve written it as always ! π
Thank you so much. Much appreciate all the adulations
Oh my my!!!
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Just beautiful it was ….
Thank you so much π
Eyes are the window to your soul …….that description explains your inspiration must be a beautiful soul. ππ
Thank you so much Sakshi. Appreciate your lovely comment
My pleasure π
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Gorgeous.β€οΈ Nothing better than this to end my day.π
Thank you Sameera have a great night
O you! The Romeo of WP!
We wish to see your Juliet πππ
Beautiful again Shantanuβ£
Haha. That is a very unique compliment. Thanks for your reading and comment, Yasmin. I truly appreciate it π
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You have a great poetic splendor. π
Beautiful wordsππ
Thank you so much Nidhi
Hmmm eyes!
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Why would a man indeed, ever need worldly pleasure. When he can be forever swept away, submerged within her eyes? Beautiful!
Thank you Warren. You are very kind
You are always enchanted by smiles and eyes.That shows your sensitivity and with such a divine beauty ,as your poem describes ,it seems natural to be intoxicated.
Now every one wants to meet your muse, Shantanu.hahs
Lol. There are many thatβs the problem
You are so sweet Megha. Always you praise my work and give me encouragement. Love and peace to you
My pleasure!
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Yeh to mujhe pata hi hai..koi shaq
Arey wah love and peace..no emojis this time..that’s a start
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Haha.
Hi sir, you have a gift for writing beautiful love poems. That’s all I can say. where do you live?
Thank you. I live in the US
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This Poem is so beautifully expressive, the eyes see the tenderness of his heart, the soul that wonders aimlessly in search…Second guessing the hand which is dealt. Guarding the heart from the unknown, but the strong emerging lover is ignited neither can fight. Unexpected, yet transparent. He fills the world may yield another. Caught in a whirlwind of temporary or eternity.
What a Quest…Like an Eagle π¦ fly above indecisiveness…
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Wow. This is brilliant. You just add so beautiful color to my poems. Thanks so much, Yonnie β€οΈ
You are quite welcome ππ
The pleasure is all mine! I appreciate your wonderful and encouraging comment!!!πΈπ
Thanks again πΈπΈππ