Through words we met
and some verses weaved a hope to behold
and despite of being miles apart
an unseen thread
bonded our deviant souls
I read her achievements with interest
she applauded my stories untold
I remained in awe on her grit to succeed she crinkled her smiles on my mysterious prose
We never met,
never heard our voices to reckon,
neither shared any common thoughts,
nor we cried or laughed on shared goal
But despite being strangers,
and living in an aberrant world,
we found a mystic hope that stayed,
like an unstated decree casted on stone,
unexplainable, sure it was,
abstruseness, it might as well sound
yet we found something to cling on to,
or ponder like a sagacious view,
to be treasured for a lifetime,
without the burden of any name to announce ,
for some relationships are best
when left undefined
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This is absolutely genius writing, beautifully written.π This describes one of the most important relationship of my life, left undefined. Love doesn’t always needs a name.π Made my day. Worth every appreciation.πΌ
Beautifully written! π
Thank you so much Sameera. Appreciate your kindness, truly.
Thanks a lot Tanya
So true. Some relationships need no definition.
Thanks Punam π
A pleasure. βΊοΈ
Undefined!! Yes, sometimes it is best to leave it like that.
Thanks A lot Vikram. Appreciate your comment
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I can see your comment
Yay π
The most beautiful thing I have read till date …….βΊοΈβΊοΈ. Somethings are left best undefined. …………and sometimes words are not enough to express admiration.ππ
What a beautiful bondπππ
Beautifully written….so true.ππ
This went so deep with me.
Thank you so much Sakshi. Much appreciate your kind words
Thanks a lot Ankit. I am glad you could connect
Thanks a lot, Madhusudan
Thank you so much Yasmin
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U r most welcome ππ
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Oh..what should I say, Shantanu. You have defined all the undefined relations in this world with your beautiful magical words. Sometimes feelings are not defined but they become so pure, serene and close to your heart that you abstain it from categorizing it.
I hope you know what I mean.
Your poems are amazing!
I love how you write!β€
Welcome bro. π
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Oh Sir! Oh My! How beautiful it is to read through
Thank you so much Pen πΈ
There is always something in your verses to connect to…!
This is such a beautiful note. Thank you so much Ravneet
Thank you so much Megha. I am so sorry to have missed commenting back on this. I am glad you could relate
Don’t be sorry..It’s easy to miss comments.I love torturing you.haha
Thanks for understanding π
Always.
Thanks a lot Megha
Beautifully expressed!
Thank you so much Ana
Amazing piece!
Thank you so much
Brilliant piece!
Thank you Warren. Much appreciate it
I love this amazing piece! You write so beautifully that the words just leap off the page without trying.
Thank you so much Diana I truly appreciate your kind words
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amazing and all purple-my fave color
Thank you π€π
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This is so very touching. Reminds me so much of two ships passing in the night. So close, yet so far away. Beautifully penned. π
This truly resonates, so wonderfully expressed. Vivid imagery, words so captivating , beautifully done.
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Thanks so much for your beautiful words. Much appreciate it
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Thanks so much for reading it so beautifully πΈπΈ
It is an extremely beautiful sentiment, which truly resonates.
Thanks for sharing your heartfelt words. πΈπΈ
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There is such freedom in not putting everything in a box with a label. Beautiful write – enjoyed it, dear Shantanu. Thank you for sharing. π
You said it so well. Thanks for reading it beautifully
You are most-est welcome. π
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