The universe was within her
The morphing moon,
The endless galaxies,
The astral brightness,
She consumed them all.
She was a force,
A rebel without remorse,
She lived per her terms,
Rules were never her concern.
She danced to her tunes,
She was a Godโs blessings, aย boon,
A deviant force
Like some mysterious rune.
No boundaries could confine her,
Limitations couldnโt deter her,
neither could hold her to any decree
And she soared achieving the impossible,
Abolishing all creeds.
Fire,
The wind,
The water,
The elements,
She had all,
The universe was within her so was the world.
Copyright ยฉ Shantanu Baruah
Beautiful
Thank you so much Sakshi
Wow, Shantanu. This is the best of yours. Loved the girl of the poem. I had once read somewhere that, the most beautiful girl is the one who lives according to her rules. You created her. ๐
the writing, the photo, excellent coupling…
reading this strikes a relatable cord for even the slightest of adventurous hearts!
Thank you so much Taruna. Appreciate your kind comment
Who is she?
Haha let it hang out up in the air
Lol ๐
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I saw her dancing freely ๐
For “her” to dance and that too freely is something quite achievable.
Beautiful Shantanu๐
Thank you Yasmin. Much appreciate your kind words
My pleasure๐๐ผ
An eternal dance spanning all the elements of the nature is the very essence of feminity and love.
If anybody could write this beautifully about the feminine power,it has to be you.well done, Shantanu
That is a huge compliment Megha. That too coming from a female and a strong writer. Thanks a lot ๐๐ธ
Well you totally deserve it.
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Thank you ๐๐ธ
You must be a hit amongst your female friends.
Haha thanks to good souls like you
Nah it’s all because of your writing..if they know how beautifully you write..nothing to do with me.
Oo.. A world controller.
Thank you so much Vikram
You are too kind ๐๐ธ
Yeah, beyond wonderful is not a reach to explain this piece!
You are so very kind Warren. Thank you my friend
Blessings!
Wow!
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Thank you so much Sona
outstanding!
Thank you so much Wendi
my pleasure.
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