He wondered,
what if he shows her his heart,
bare without any shield
raw and bleeding
for her to feel the nerves
pulsating with her name on it
Will she recoil?
and vanish in an abyss
wearing a veil
and will he fail to see her again like before
and if he somehow meanders the serpentine labyrinth ways,
that she has put in between,
will he be able to crawl his way into her world,
rescuing her sinking heart and his rustic soul
Living in such predicament
he braided his thoughts
while she carried a diminishing hope
in her doe-shaped eyes
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Aap hume maar hi daalo sir khubsurati se.Ati sundar πππππ
You are real sweet Yasmin. Thank you for liking my work. I so greatly appreciate it. Love and peace to you ππΈ
Beautiful Shantanu
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Pleasure is mine SirππΌ
Good night!
You too have a great night ππΈ
Hello gentlemen ,
I have nominted you for the Recognition Award . I’ll be glad if you make things happen through your writing π have a good day
This leaves me speechless………
How to express, when a thing is beyond beautiful? π
My words are betraying me and I fail to find something apt for this post.
Waah…..waah…….behtarin kavita.
The pain and love are so beautifully merged. While reading, the whole scene was running in front of my eyes. Beautiful β£οΈ
Oh Lord! Ghat last line just got to me Shantanu. So much is expressed here.
How to express the beauty of such beautiful lines woven so perfectly ! π
Your writing inspires me.
Perfect depiction of both the versions of emotions π
Thank you so much
This is such a beautiful comment Pen. I appreciate your kindness
Thank you so much. You are so kind
Thank you so much Lorraine
You’re welcome.
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You are so kind to say such beautiful words. Thanks for stopping by and reading. Much appreciate
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Pleasure was mine π
Thank you Sakshi
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The mysteries and puzzle heart put in from of us to solve..love always is if then situation but it comes to those who dives in it with both feet.Beautiful picture of alluring love.Loved it to bits, Shantanu.
Where is this doe eyed beauty, anyways??
Thank you so much Megha. I truly appreciate your kind comment and your beautiful thought
Lovely poem or should I say story?
Thank you so much OJ. much appreciate the follow and your comment
Thank you for d follow as well, & happy blogging!
Happy blogging to you too πΈ
My pleasure
Beautiful poem π…The words you have used is brilliant π…Loved it a lot π.
My pleasure π
Your writing is pure bliss… really, what can I say that hasn’t been said already? Fantastic piece, Shantanu
Thank you so much Ana. It means a lot
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Thanks a lot Priscilla
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Thanks Shantanu. You are writing beautifully these days. A pleasure to read your poems.
Thanks a lot Megha. Much appreciate the kindness
Guess which part of NJ I was an hour back?
Somerset
Yes smarty pants.
π I was not in town though
See I already knew that
Haha.
What brought you here
My friend and my poetry award function.
Where was the function
Pierre’s at South Brunswick
Congratulations. That is some feat ππππ
Thanks.It was very well organized.I met the other finalists too.
Well done
Thanks Shantanu.People are so nice towards poets.They see them with so much of admiration.
Wow. Good for you
So beautiful! It’s a pleasure to read you work!β€
Thank you so much Richa. You are always so kind
Good for us.
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Beautifully written!
Thank you so much Diana
What a predicament! Nice!
Thanks a lot my friend
You’re utmost welcome. π
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My pleasure!
Thanks
This is lovely Shantanu.
Thanks a lot Punam
You are welcome. βΊοΈ
Just halfway through…will read the rest tomorrow.
You are too kind. Have a good night π
Thank you.
You enjoy your day. βΊοΈ
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You write so so beautifully sir π
Thank you
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