All my will to detest your view,
My promise to disregard every shade of your hue,
The strenuous look I scorn all this while,
The drawn countenance and the pensive smile,
Every stance I compel my heart to swear by,
Somehow I convince my mind you are a lie.
But all thoughts wrestles down to a painful defeat,
When I see you sauntering down that street.
Even your gentle whisper,
Makes me drop all my guards,
Leaving me awestruck,
Dissolving all spars.
Though I know it is a deceitful smile,
Yet I ignore every impeding rile.
And I stand there spellbound,
Unsure what to do,
Entwine in your quagmire,
Burning in my self instilled rue.
when the heart ignores any warning and wants what it wants.
True. Well said. Thanks for your comment
My pleasure.The weather today makes me feel like this.
I know. I wonder where is summer
Na re.Summer is gone with the wind.Now we will have only two seasons in this part of the world..Fall and Winter.
Haha true
Your writing has the power to leave your readers spellbound…….it’s beautiful and Soulful. π
Damn! These words.β€οΈ
Thank you so much. Do u ever sleep π
Thank you so much Devika ππΈ
We listen to our heart though we know it’s wrong π€¦ββοΈπ€¦ββοΈπ€¦ββοΈ
Yeah so true Yasmin. Thanks for your comment always appreciate it
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Haa haa ππΌ
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Sometimes the heart seems to have a mind of its own!
How beautiful your thought is Punam. This is a post by itself π
The moment I read your poem, this came to my mind. So you are the inspiration. π
Thank you. The thought was beautiful. Thanks for the read and such gorgeous comment. Blessings your way and have a great day
Thank you.π
Good night.
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When the desires of the heart overpowers the will, to break free! Beautifully said!
Awe struck. π³
Thank you so much Warren
Thank you Adithya
Youβre welcome!
We have to listen to the Soul and heed its warning, you see the temptation but the evil vines from within them show you the truth. Often we do not want to listen as the mind subtly urges us to step into the quagmire
Ab aisa lagta saari poems by heart hai muje.π€but just can’t have enough of it. I can read aGain and again.
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Thank you so much for your kind words and reading. It really means a lot