Her name was engraved in every stria
crisscrossing his soma
screaming her presence
from all visible outlook
Foundered in her mirage
and delirious for her essence
he perched his soul
on the toes of his hope
As he looked through his demurred eyes
the phalanx of her grotesque illusions
made his hope leavened
and in such momentary ecstasy
his bereavement remained quiescent
and the ludicrous heart weaved some dreams hopelessly impossible
but then miracles happen often
in such momentary trice
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Ahh what hopeful romantics we are…
Your writings make me smile and laugh with joy from our finite loves… and then drift to the place of the Divine resilient love within..
Earlier maths, now biology. I wonder what will be the next ๐
Beautifully expressed ๐๐
Exquisite and sublime ๐
You are amazing and wonderful beyond any words…I have no doubt about the success of your unpublished book ..๐ธ๐ธ
Love the ending Shantanu
heย perchedย his soul
on the toes of hisย hope
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The best part is the end๐๐๐
Thank you so much Taruna. Your beautiful comment means a lot to me
Haha. Thank you for your kind words. Remember I was a bio technology student ๐
Thank you so much Ekta
Thank you so much Sakshi
Thank you so much Deepanwita. I truly appreciate your kind words.
You are welcome Shantanu ๐
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Thank you so much I love those two lines too
Thanks a lot Lorraine
I always think endings say a lot. Like the climax of the whole poem.
Beautiful.I agree with Yasmin those are really beautiful lines.amd you have painted the ludicrous heart so well.Now everyone in Wp community knows how romantic are you at heart.
Okay. I didn’t knew it. But it is good to know more about you. ๐
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Haha do I need to hide. Thanks you guys you people are too sweet
Oh yes we are.. hahaha
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Thanks a lot Lorraine
Indeed ludicrous heart๐
Isnโt it the foolish insanity ๐๐ธ
But it’s should be that way๐
Totally
But it* should be that way๐
*sighs* So beautiful and romantic. ๐
Thank you so much Diana ๐ธ๐
You’re most welcome! ๐
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I loved this one. “But then miracles happen in such momentary trice.” Just beautiful.
Thank you so much Smurf
Even a foolish heart hopes for more! Nicely said!
Thanks a lot Warren
My pleasure!
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You’re good.
Thank you so much
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