Her whiff traveled like sonata’s adagio
slowly engulfing each one of his senses,
and her scent,
abrading one layer at a time,
deciphering some mystery,
creating many illusions,
without any definitive reasons
or any descriptive rhymes
Lost in her spell
he drifted and fell like a feather
from high above the sky
slowly and in a subtle flow
he emerged in her love,
permeating her fragrance
soaked in a few shades of azure
and the vivid artistry
pervading all at once
The more he drowned,
the more he realized,
how mystic was her depth,
how aberrant was her seance
And immersed in her love
he failed to ground his feet,
for her endearment was an abyss,
no enticing words,
no spread of color,
and no audacious thought
could ever hold her soul,
and like an unheard whisper
she was nowhere to be found
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Very sensual. As a sense, smell often gets overlooked in writing. It’s hard to put on the page, but so important.
Love this!❤️
Beautiful poem 👌
Someone’s perfume is doing wonders.😀…. jokes apart. … It’s tender , beautiful, exquisite and so full of love. 👏👏 Loved it.
I agree she smelled so good and she wound her love right around him until morning then vanished. Perfume is one odour that i shard to describe in words at times. great work Shantanu !! Much appreciated my friend !!
Awesome. 🙂
You words could make my mind chilling and what not. A stellar!
One more fantastic poem🖤
Thank you Sameera
Thank you so much, Hardip
Such beautiful words..Gives such a fleeting sense of freedom along with the mystic sense of love.
Haha. The scent sometimes drive people wild. 😊 Thank you so much Sakshi.
Thank you so much for your kind comment James
Thanks so much Ankit
That is really sweet of you to say, Devika. Thank you
Thank you so much Jaya
The rhythm, and the flow of the poem, just splendid !
And the scent, everything about this is just beautiful ! 🙂
😊 my pleasure
My pleasure 🙃
Thank you so much megha for your kind words
Thank you so much for your kind comment
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Its always a pleasure ! 🙂
Pleasure always☺️
Welcome bro 🙂
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Loved the use of words!
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Thank you Pen
Pleasure is all mine 🙂
Exquisite. The beauty is so eloquently depicted in each and every verse. 😊
“Lost in her spell…………………………………………………………….. pervading all at once”. Beautiful lines.
You really can play with words. 😄
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Thank you so much Anne 🤗
Lost in her spell
he drifted and fell like a feather
from high above the sky
slowly and in a subtle flow
he emerged in her love,
Beautiful ❤
Your words are fragrant today💛
Thank you Yasmin. Your comment brings smile
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Thank you 😊
“Her whiff traveled like sonata’s adagio.” — this very first line just grabbed my hand, and flew away into the poem’s charm. Beautiful!
You are very kind. Thank you for your comment
Enticed, but wanted more! Mystically written!
Thank you so much Warren
You’re welcome!
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Wow…Shantanu this was captivating, so sensually expressed, a mystic discover. Drawn by enchanted words filled with depth. Her smell you could imagine, intoxicating every part of you, the love you felt. Yet, she showed no interest. No word not even a whisper, no response.
Wow… You wrote this last June.
It would be wrong to ask who is she…lol Authors privacy 😀
Beautifully written Poem so loving , rich with great depth. 💜💜
Wow. I sometimes go back and read my work to relate your beautifully created words. Thank you for this. I so appreciate it 💕
I’m smiling…right now and can’t stop, laughing 😂.
I actually do the same thing Something seem vaguely familiar. You are quite welcome, well deserving. 💕
I appreciate your sharing.😇
Lol. Thanks so much 🌸🌸😊😊
You are certainly welcome😊
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