The reach was not too far nor was the grit. I knew all it would take is the touch of my trailing voice to make her detest the world and come crashing to my arms.
But there were pronouncements; there were diminutions holding me back in an excruciating torment. As my mind got clouded with insanity the only way I found respite was to flow with the tide.
I walked up to her to be as close two humans could without abutting. There were no words, no reverberation whatsoever. The uncanny beats of her heart were making me anarchy. With some courage, I started to move my lips to form the syllable but before even the labium could vibrate I found her in my shield, curving in a cocoon of love shedding away all uncalled reasoning and thoughts.
Copyright © Shantanu Baruah
sounds like an amazing start to a novel!
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Thank you so much for your kind comment
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you are welcome……….maybe I was wrong, maybe it is the ending to a novel………..
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Now you are giving me ideas 🌸🌸
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yay!
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😊🌸💛
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This is so intimately beautiful, Shantanu!
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Thank you so much Isha 😊🌸
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Wooooooow
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Thank you so much Adithya
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Such a wonderful post
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Thank you so much Pen
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Oh! I could feel the desire there. Pretty intense I must say. Great piece of work. 😊
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Thank you so much Anne
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Wonderful!❤
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Thank you Richa
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This is that special moment of intimacy in the relationship which crosses the barrier of inhibitions and renders your soul pure and naked to the one you love. How beautifully you have weaved this into your magical words.Bravo, Shantanu.
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Thank you so much Megha. Your words are precious
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Thanks Shantanu.This space is to celebrate your poetry
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And yours too 😁
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You are too sweet, Shantanu
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😊🌸
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And you send flowers and such
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🌸🌸
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