And your soul,
like the soothing moonlight,
the white shroud in an otherwise silhouette night,
under such aura many hearts melts, basking in glory,
drenched in love,
nurturing the faith,
that bonds the earth to the moon,
the moon to the sun,
and the sun to the epitome of the celestial shine,
life smiles in obscurity,
pain subsides in disdain times,
and skies still embrace us
keeping our beliefs alive
Copyright ยฉ Shantanu Baruah
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Ay… so beautiful! I am really mesmerized!
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Thank the so much for your kind words
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You are welcome!
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I am not able to comment on your posts
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Several readers told me the same thing. I am contacting WP now. Also I have to look in my spam folder now.
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That is not good. Your last two pieces were splendid
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Thank you sooo much! WP just tested my site. They commented on my last poem. I am sorry to bother you but I need to ask you this question : can you see the commenting box?
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Ok let me check
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I am able to see the c
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I am able to see the comment box but unable to comment. It gives error
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Ok. Thank you so much for your help!
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No worries
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One of your best.
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You are so kind D. Love and peace
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Beautifully beautiful! Thank you ๐
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Nice.
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Thank you so much Yassy
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Welcome ๐
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โskies still embrace usโจkeeping our beliefs aliveโ beautifully constructed!!!!๐๐๐ป๐๐ผ
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Thank you so much for your kind words
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precious.
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Thank you so much Wendi
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my pleasure.
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Skies still embrace us… especially loved that line…
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Thank you so much Geetika
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Most welcome…
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There is some kind a serenity in these words. Beautifully crafted
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Thank you so much Sakshi
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Beautiful โค
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Thanks a lot Tammy
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No problem, you’re welcome always.
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Thanks a lot Tammy ๐๐ธ
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Welcome ๐
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BEAUTIFUL.
Your poems are like a deep ocean. The more I read the more I drown in them. I genuinely loved it. It’s so soulful and pure. ๐
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Thank you Anne. You are real generous with the words. Thank you so much for being such an ardent reader of my work. It means a lot to me
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I can’t help myself. They are so mesmerising that I find myself amidst the beautiful world you create. So I should thank you for that. ๐
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Thank you so much Anne. I really appreciate your kindness
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You very much welcome ๐
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*You are. ๐
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Lol. See I told you I do typo as well
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๐ ๐. Thats why we should type slow.
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Canโt help. My mind things so fast my hands cannot cope up ๐
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Exactly my problem. I think a lot of things but while typing I don’t know what happens to my spellings. Now I guess actual writing was quite better at least spellings were not so wrong like it is now. ๐ Gadgets made us their puppets.
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Haha. I agree. ๐
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Beautiful!!!โค
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Thank you so much Richa
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This is wonderful read for me. the contrast the symphonies and everything is so profound.
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Thank you so much Aquib
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It’s always been my pleasure. Best wishes.
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Thanks Aquib. Best wishes to you as well
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Beautiful and very soulful.Very different from your usual style of writing.Loved it.
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Thank you so much Megha. Appreciate your kindness
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My pleasure.As others have said ,very serene.
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Thank you ๐
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Any reason for diverting from the usual style,if I may ask?
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Actually, I didnโt realized till you pointed out ๐
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Haha..Kahan dhyaan rehta hai tumhara aaj Kal?
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Lol. I wrote it on my way back on the plane. Half asleep ๐
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Allah..soye soye bhi itna sunder likhte ho.๐บ๐บ
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Haha ๐๐ธ
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So beautiful!!
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Thank you so much Diana
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Agree with Megha, very soulful and different … I like very much ๐
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Thank you so much Kate. Appreciate your kindness
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you are most welcome ๐
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This was very refreshing. I liked it.
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Thank you so much
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Such a pious piece of poetry. Loved it ๐ค
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Thank you jaya. ๐๐ธโค๏ธ
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My pleasure ๐
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Each of your poems is very deep. Excellent poetry.
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Thank you so much for you kind comment
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Warm and beautiful lines ! ๐
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Thank you again for your lovely words
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Beautifully said!
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Thank you Warren
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Youโre welcome!
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Beautiful ๐
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Thank you Yasmin ๐ธ
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Reblogged this on Ckonfab.
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Beautifully penned….Awwww…..So love this, Shantanu the essence of is mesmerizing and captivating. Takes my breath away.
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Thanks so much, Yonnie. I so appreciate it
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You are certainly welcome
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