The heart’s suffering,
burning down to shades of gray,
like some cold vapor thin ashes
of some residual charcoal in disgrace,
blackened and fast disappearing
to a state of oblivion,
the universe reducing to absurdity,
the hopes bleak,
faith disarmed,
surrendered to the atrocities of this thing called life
And then she came
like a gentle breeze,
love survived under the gentle warmth of her innocent smile,
everything appeared attainable
no mountain was hard to climb,
no peaks were impossible to soar,
no ocean was deep enough not to be explored,
and with hope in the fold of her twinkling eyes,
the soul remained in blithe,
and the world a beautiful place to thrive
he survived
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Beautifully written!
Thank you so much Tammy
You’re welcome a lot!
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Splendid ๐
Thank you so much
My pleasure ๐
love it!
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Thank you so much
Ah! The famous pink flower ๐๐
Haha.
Love survives once man finds that the tender vines of love exist once she comes back to be with him. All things are right forever
Beautifully said James. Thanks for commenting
You are welcome Shantanu. Those words just arrived in my mind while I read this post
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Thank you Shantanu
you are an irrepressible romantic ๐
Haha love your comment ๐
coz it’s true ๐
I want to bask in the bliss of your words, forever.
Love and peace to you Kate ๐
Wow Devika. This is such a beautiful comment., that too coming from the goddess of poetry. Bliss is the word. Thank you for your kindness
Beautiful. Such is the power of love.It resuscitates you from the deep abyss of sadness and despair.Well penned, Shantanu.
I am grasped by this marvellous combination of elegance and serenity. So, that I don’t want it to let go of me. ๐
Your writings are beautifully infectious that I can’t help to read more and get inspired all the time. ๐
And your comment is so beautiful. Thank you Megha
You are so kind, Anne. Thank you rod liking my work and leaving behind such beautiful thoughts.
You’re most welcome. ๐
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Well your beautiful words bring out the poetess in me.
Look who is taking, the celebrity ๐
omg..my friend called me this in a party yesterday..you guys are being silly..I’m no celebrity.
Enjoy your moment
pleasing to the mind…….thank you!
Thank you so much Wendi
Such a rhythmical creation of beauty in words. ๐๐
Thank you so much Rudraa
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Gorgeous use of words, what a way to portray that true feeling. Well done!
Thank yuh so much Jaya
Thank you so much Elle
Welcome
Magical touch and innocent smile — that says it all. So wonderfully sweet and beautiful. Thank you. ๐
My pleasure. I think my comments on your posts is going to Spam
Oh, I will just check it.
Thank you so much Krishna for reading and commenting
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Magical… touch of writing!
Thank you so much Warren. Appreciate your kind comment
Most welcome
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So beautifully written!
Thank our so much
I am in love with your saviour๐
You present her so beautifully๐๐
Thank you so much Yasmin. I so appreciate your comment. Love and peace to you
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Beautifully expressed that feeling of love slowly stepping in and brightening the whole world ! ๐
Thank you so much for your kind read
My pleasure !
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Beautiful shantanu! I love it!
Thanks so much, Carol. I really appreciate your words
Youโre so welcome Shan ๐
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