She was a woman of
vivid emotions,
artistic renditions,
and bold strokes
dwelled deep in some magical potion
He was a man lost in her enamor
scrawling endlessly,
sketching passionately,
painting vigorously,
putting forward a vague attempt
to arrest her shining countenance
in the universe of his desirous thoughts
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Beautiful ❤️
Thank you so much Ria
It’s very Empowering.
I can visualise both she and he. Wonderfully penned. 🙂
Some of the old style painters from many life times ago were known to have some sorts of mental disorders. Where they actually painting a real live lady or did a being from the other level down come up to take her position for the artist ?
Love the imagery!
That’s so very beautiful
A wonderful description, brings about creative imagination of the man & woman….
That’s the power of words 👍
lol delightful, much smoother to read without those bold words, thanks 🙂
Beautiful Shontanu. I hope he managed it in the end. I concur with calmkate that this is much easier to read. I never saw your response when you were asked why you put some words in bold or italics. I thought it must be because you did something that we used tondo in my writing group. We would get a ductionary and clise our eyes and point at a word. We used about seven wirds usually. Then we had to incorpirate them into a poem. It was quite interesting. Is that what you were doing?
Lovely ❤️
Vivid words indeed.they really come alive when you are reading them😍
So, was he succesful to do justice to her beauty! ☺️
Thank you so yah Anne
How lovely. That sounds fascinating. Thank you for reading and commenting
Thank you you so much Isha
Thanks so much Adithya
Thank you so much for reading and commenting
Ha ha thanks for your comment
Thanks for reading. The bold words usually were the essence of my poem. And at times if you read them is the poem itself
Thank you so much Jaya
Time will tell 😊thanks for stopping by
Shontanu, thankyou for explaining. I can see what you mean now. Yes, it was a good idea. Whatver you do anyway, it is alk good. Smile
Thank you so much for your kind comment
Thank you so much Lorraine
Welcome
all of your poems are amazing.
Enigmatic hmmm!
You are welcome.
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Thank you so much Wendi. It means a lot to me
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It is just goid to read your pietry however you do it. It isvreak fun though, poiting at words in a ductionary and seeing what kind of a piem you can make out of the. It can end up quite funny too lol
you are very welcome
Thank you for understanding 😊🌸
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Wow
Wow
Wow
Killed it😍
Thank you so much Jaya
“YOU ARE KILLING IT”
With your runic incarnations
Readers are spellbound… just can’t have enough of your words.
Kabhi toh kuch bakwas likho😆😏🙄
See..
I so envy you 😎😏
Ha ha. Thanks for your kind words
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The ending is amazing! I almost drowned in how poetic it was. Just wow.
Thank you so much for your kind words.
You’re always welcome 😊
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My pleasure 😊
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Beautiful as always.👌👌
Thank you so much
I am always glad to read what you post Shantanu. You are welcome as you wrote to assist us to find our own meanings.
Thank you so much for your kind words
you are most welcome
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Shantanu did I ask you for an interview for Meet the Bloggers, my other blog? I thought I did but maybe my memory is incorrect?
You have Kate. I was traveling the last week. Will give it a shot tomorrow
Remind me again what I need to do. I am sorry
ah, know you’re busy, no problemo
Follow this https://meetthebloggersblog.wordpress.com/2017/03/22/format
thanks!
Thanks
Gracious 😊🌸
I can visualize an artist sketching a women..trying desperately to capture the essence and the beauty of her subject in her strokes.
such is the power of your beautiful words.
Thank you so much for such a beautiful comment. Much appreciate you my kindness
Mine or yours?
Lol thar was a typo
haha..I know..I was just pulling your leg..
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You are too kind..I was being silly.
I know 😜
kya bolo..great minds revenge alike..lol
He and she, together making a beautiful painting !
This is yet another amazing one ! 🙂
Haha lol
Thank you so much for your kind words
Wow! Wow! Wow!
Thank you so much Tammy
Welcome!
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Vivid artistry indeed!
Thanks a lot Warren
A pleasure!
Art,Love,Poetry and you …..beautiful💕
Thank you so much Yasmin. Your words means a lot
The creativity he is putting forth to win her attention, really resonated with me. Beautiful poem. -Jill
Thanks a lot Jill. Appreciate your kind comment
You are most welcome.
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Always my pleasure Shantanu 😊🌼
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perfect.
Thank you Atifa
This is a very nice interesting poem. Keep up the good work bro.
Thanks so much for your kind read
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