Once oasis, now a dried barren place,
deride of life,
and the eerie had melodies laden with wraith lullabies,
subtle and obscure,
screaming in silence on the ruins of once existing life,
now demons lurked in the wilderness,
beaconing the specters caged in dungeons,
beneath the lenses of the hollow eyes
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Wow!
Keep sharing good things 🙂
Thanks a lot for commenting 😊🌸
You’re most welcome!
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you have done it again…….
Thank you so much for your kind words Wendi
Bravo! excellent poem! “beaconing the specters caged in dungeons,
beneath the lenses of the hollow eyes” These lines are a killer!
very welcome……..
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Beautiful.🙂
Thank you so much Chris
You are welcome 🙂
The degree of passion in this is something beyond my imagination. It’s so fervent, but at the same time so eloquently expressed.
The oasis might have turned into a barren place but the intensity you poured in it, turned into some vigorous waves. 🙂
Loved it! 😊
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Thank you so much Anne. Much appreciate you reading it so beautifully and commenting
You’re always welcome ☺
Thank you 😊🌸
This poem is very beautifully expressed 👌👌👌…Hats off 🙂…!!!
Thank you so much Priscilla
Why no highlights 🤔
Your welcome 🙂
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Some people didn’t like it. So thought of doing it without them 😊
Really 🙄and now what you think after doing away with it😠
Haha. So you think highlights were good ?
That’s your style😎
I still love to read you. Highlights or no highlights,how does it matter.
Just that it’s your style.
Ok. 😊will bring it back. Thank you for your support and encouragement
It’s like something is missing visually. Nothing changes still
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Thanks for the feedback. 😊🌸
Hollow eyes indeed 🙈 grieving.
You can write on just about anything in an extra ordinary style.
Still waiting for potatoe poem though. LoL
I so wish …If I could hijack all your thoughts 😠😏
Thank you so much for your kind words. Appreciate all the kindness. Potato is coming your way soon 😊
Sorrows of once beautiful and rich life has been beautifully potrayed in your words.
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Thank you so much Megha
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Beautiful style of writing……umda lekhan.
Thank you so much my friend
My pleasure Shantanu.
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I read it and liked it and then read it again because then I realize it was missing something: the highlights. Anyways, beautifully written as always.
Thank you Diana, the highlights are back again – thank you for reading my work so deeply – it means a lot to me ❤️
So heartfelt and intense !
It’s beautiful ! 🙂
Thank you so much.
Its a pleasure !
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Love this👌👌👌
How can something dead sound so alive🤔
Oh yes how did I forget,I am reading Shantanu😊
You are too kind to me Dr. Yasmin. Hugs and love to you ❤️
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It’s a pleasure to read you Sir!!!
What should I call you( Like you called me Dr)
Haha. Are you not a dr.
You’re welcome and yes, I’ve noticed. I’ve come accustomed to it for it’s your trademark.
Thank you. 😊🌸❤️
Yes I am😄
So Dr. sahiba. What is the problem 😊😀
Haha
I dunno
I feel weird coz my friends don’t call me Dr Yasmin😄
Ok I will not then. 😊
Thanks😊
You are welcome Dr. oops
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