And she spoke with that velvety soft whisper,
One syllable at a time,
like a gentle drizzle of some natureβs caper.
And the whir drifted,
Like some pre dawn dews,
rolling off leisurely leaving behind clues.
She enthused serenity,
but I remained in complete chaos.
Copyright Β© Shantanu Baruah
Your “she” is marvelous, the way you describe her. The closing lines took my breath away π
Thank you so much Nandita. I appreciate your kind words and comment πβ€οΈ
Amazing ending! π
The pleasure was mine, Shantanu ππ
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Everything was impeccable, but that ending said so much. Wowie!!
Just reading this and serenity washes over…
Oh Shantanu. She sounds gorgeous. And you in chaos. Oh dearie me. But it is funny how this can happen. Chaos in the midst of something beautiful.
Your words are magic…beautifully penned!
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Thank you so much Geetika, I appreciate your kind words
Thank you so much Zany. I truly appreciate your kind words
Thank you so much Fariha.
The pre dawn dews …π. What a beautiful use of metaphor.
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My pleasure
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You are welcome.
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You always amaze me with your poems…π€π€
Thank you so much Jaya ππΈ
The pleasure is mine π€
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When someone’s beauty mesmerizes you leaving you in chaos.πΌ
Ah! Such a gorgeous read.π₯
Magnificent. The character you build in your poems are splendid and your way of enhancing their nature and personality is amazingly wonderful. π
Your goddess of love is beautifulπ
Most welcome…
Thank you so much Sameera. Much appreciate it
My pleasure Shantanu.πΌ
Thank you so much Anne. You are always kind towards my work
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Brilliant How someone soft whispers can put your heart in utter chaos and leave you dazed. The magic of beautiful voice..this makes me so nostalgic.
I am glad you could relate. Thanks for your kind words
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