Poetry

Breaking Dawn

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The dawn cracked the twilight with a roar,
the charcoal laden shadows resisted,
but failed to arrest the pewter skies,
and an occult blend of cerulean, azure and turquoise hue
slipped through the crevice
painting the world with some vivid artistry,
it was surreal,
universe gyrating,
tenor uplifting,
genial smiles spreading,
a renewed hope took birth in her sparkle,
and slowly but surely she shed away her ostensible self
detaching from the illusion world

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57 thoughts on “Breaking Dawn”

  2. “…a renewed hope took birth in her sparkle,
    and slowly but surely she shed away her ostensible self 
    detaching from the illusion world”. Bravo! 👏

    This was a magical read.

  5. You painted colours with words beautifully.❤️ This is the dawn I always want to wake up to.
    ‘renewed hope’ – my favorite phrase.🌼

  25. I love dawn and dusk colors!
    I make sure to take a walk during both of those time!
    Henceforth your words will walk with me too and the dawn will feel more beautiful ❤

  40. Such beautiful imagery you have painted with your words. The starting lines hooked me
    so so beautiful”The dawn cracked the twilight with a roar,”.

  49. Breaking Dawn is breathtaking , Shantanu.
    This is a captivating imagery, it truly resonates, speaks volumes. Beautifully written 🙏😊
    A birthing coming from Night
    Seeping into the crevices of the Morning Light
    Shredding of the night, rising of Morning
    Renewed Hope
    Sparkled Smiles
    Illusions Broken
    Free
    -Yonnie💜

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