The dawn cracked the twilight with a roar,
the charcoal laden shadows resisted,
but failed to arrest the pewter skies,
and an occult blend of cerulean, azure and turquoise hue
slipped through the crevice
painting the world with some vivid artistry,
it was surreal,
universe gyrating,
tenor uplifting,
genial smiles spreading,
a renewed hope took birth in her sparkle,
and slowly but surely she shed away her ostensible self
detaching from the illusion world
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Beautifully Written❤
“…a renewed hope took birth in her sparkle,
and slowly but surely she shed away her ostensible self
detaching from the illusion world”. Bravo! 👏
This was a magical read.
” a renewed hope took birth in her sparkle”
Shantanu I am glad I started my morning with this wonderful piece of yours. Wow
The beauty of dawn and the renewed hope could’nt be expressed in better words.
You painted colours with words beautifully.❤️ This is the dawn I always want to wake up to.
‘renewed hope’ – my favorite phrase.🌼
The imagery of dawn painted a beautiful picture of renewed hope Shantanu…..Enjoyed reading this 🙂
a renewed hope took birth in her sparkle
Beautifully penned 🌹❤️
Thank you so much
Thank you so much for your kind words, Nameera. I appreciate your read
Thank you so much Bhavna for your kind words. I really appreciate it
Your welcome
Sakshi, you are always so kind with your words. Thank you
My pleasure 😊
Thank you Sameera for reading it so deeply. Love and hugs
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wonderful!
Thank you Wendi
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Thank you so much Radhika
Thank you so much Mahee
It’s too difficult to detach yourself from that illusion world..
It is. Thanks for your lovely comment
I love dawn and dusk colors!
I make sure to take a walk during both of those time!
Henceforth your words will walk with me too and the dawn will feel more beautiful ❤
What a beautiful thing to say Yasmin. I am much humbled 😊🌸🤗❤️
I wish my comments were as beautiful as your poetries.I fall short of words to be true🤦♀️
You are so kind Yasmin. This time I am out of words to convey my gratitude ❤️
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Welcome 😊
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Couldn’t have been expressed better!❤
Thank you so much Rich ❤️
Aww.. Rich – that’s what my best (est) friend calls me!❤
(Or was it a typo and I am just a mushy person! Lol..)
Lol. If this is what your best friends call you I will keep it as is. Happy to call you Rich provided you don’t mind ❤️
Hahaha.. I don’t have the mind to mind it at all! 😉
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Such beautiful imagery you have painted with your words. The starting lines hooked me
so so beautiful”The dawn cracked the twilight with a roar,”.
Thank you so much for your kind words. Truly appreciate it 😊🌸
This is so beautiful. I am glad she broke free of the illusion
Thank you Sona
Wow! The imagery of this one is stunning. Really enjoy this poem. -Jill
Thank you so much Jill
You are welcome.
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Breaking Dawn is breathtaking , Shantanu.
This is a captivating imagery, it truly resonates, speaks volumes. Beautifully written 🙏😊
A birthing coming from Night
Seeping into the crevices of the Morning Light
Shredding of the night, rising of Morning
Renewed Hope
Sparkled Smiles
Illusions Broken
Free
-Yonnie💜
Thanks so much dear friend for such a beautiful comment
You are certainly welcome dearest friend
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Thanks
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Thanks so much for sharing it
Always my pleasure, Shantanu!!
My absolute pleasure