He weaved his guile in sugar coated words,
cajoled her with his skillful deceive,
and when she came into his false ensemble,
he deluded her grails with his sophistry,
now she had left him for good,
but the shards of his deceit
was forever engraved on her heart,
a poignant reminder,
that still rattled her for her naive belief
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Where’s the dictionary 🤔
..I want to know..how does that make him feel now?
you pen down feeling so beautifully
Damn!! This one speaks to me.
Yep. Good descripton of deception. Or is it seduction?
Beautiful and poignant.
Lol. Thanks for reading dear
That is a good point. But see this poem was never about him, as he doesn’t matter. You are always so kind to my work. Thanks for the constant support ❤️
Thank you so much Nimra.
Thank you so much Nandita
You penned the deception so well!!
Thank you so much Kranti
I KNOW…. just my curiosity 😎you are welcome
Absolutely. May be I will write something along with some potatoes
Haha
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Smart escape😏
Haha always
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On 2nd thoughts . I think more than her he is deceiving himself..🤔
You want to give t a shot writing his perspective. It will be good to hear your views
Aaah
I have to think.. maybe? Why not?
Go right ahead.
😎mission deception
Haha. I will wait
Lovely. Beautiful as always, yet seems so wonderful. 😊
Thank you so much Anne
You’re welcome! 😄
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Heartfelt and beautiful as always!❤
Thank you so much Rich❤️
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Her mastery
She fell for those eyes
Not for the sugar coated words.
His eyes mirrored a different tale ..
He was deceiving his emotions for her.
The guile she could see
But didn’t utter…as she knew
The deceit was for her to go and
Not for what he had for her.
She fell for the eyes
Not for the sugar coated words.
Eyes mirrored a different tale ..
He was deceiving his emotions for her.
The guile she could see
But didn’t utter…as she knew
The deceit was for her to go and
Not for what he had for her
O ho twice🙄draft and edited lol.
Take the first one as the final.
pleasure is mine
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Thank you Jay for this. It is really beautiful. Don’t waste it in a a comment post it in your blog. Love and hugs. Also, try your hands with poetry your are brilliant ❤️
🤗 reallllyyyyy..you are being just too kind..
But I think you can make it sound more convincing..and beautiful. It would be great to see it your words
Yes – I mean it
No this is perfect – doesn’t need another person to write again
Haha… alright. Thank you.
Hmmm
my pleasure
The raw emotion in this is so beautiful!
Thank you so very much
Thank you Megha
Thank you Lorraine. Seduction is on his mind for sure
My pleasure. 😄
Deep wounds are hard to heal. Nice!
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