The overcast skies,
The gray texture looming with hues of bries,
And endorsing the previous downpour,
Were the water puddles scattered on the moor.
The fidget wind leaving with egress,
Making the waves a tad restless,
The restive seagulls were flying around,
And the tall coconut trees swaying with a trail of sound.
And then it started to drizzle,
The tiny droplets covered the ground,
Some ran for shelters,
But few leaped, raring to leave the compound.
Such was the nature’s essence,
To its rhythm the creation surrounds,
Every living soul in the Mother Earth’s embrace,
Danced to its lasting redound.
Copyright © Shantanu Baruah
Superb imagery flaked by a wonderful execution! I really enjoyed reading this poem!
Beautifullyy expressed ❤️🌺
Wow. You’ve painted such a lucid picture with words. This is truly an artwork beautifully put into words.👏
It created the scene in front of my eyes..really enjoyed it🤗🤗
Thank you so much for your kind comment 🌸😊
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Beautiful poem
Thank you so much son❤️
The rain! Isn’t it a joyous celebration when it rains!
The writing was happily vivid 🙂
Wow I love the image that it created in my mind 💕
Before now, am not a poetry person…. But am beginning to find it interesting becoz of few bloggers. Nice one dear ✌🌸
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Beautiful imagination
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