Read my daughter Nitara’s poem on Lemonade 😊😊


It’s sugary sweet
On a nice hot day
The ice is crunchy
Down by the bay

You slurp it down
In one big sip
And slowly
you would lick your lips

It’s tastes really sour
It’s cold and refreshing
It’s​ all over my mouth
You should’ve seen the look on my face!

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52 thoughts on “Lemonade”

  1. This is quite amazing, Shantanu! Nitara sure captured the essence of a good lemonade right ❀

    Lemonades are awesome, which is why I serve literary versions of them πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€

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      1. Haha. It was just the sort of silly joke you can expect from a nocturnal writer πŸ˜€ I absolutely adore the childhood innocence in her simple words. She is going to be a great writer when she grows up πŸ™‚

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  2. Attagirl..!!! Due to lack of time, I saw and liked the post yesterday, but could read and comment today.. sorry for that.. 😝
    Nice work from a young, but a great mind.. good parenting, must say.. blessed parents you both are..!!!! Keep encouraging her.. πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ˜πŸ‘ŒπŸΌ

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          1. Awww… I was thinking of asking their age.. great to know that from such a tender age they are in such great company with words and thoughts, here. Great writers in the making.. πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ˜‡πŸ’•


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