The hope that I hold,
The believe that I keep,
The thoughts that are bold,
The feelings that are deep.
And if you can see my burning char,
you will know how pure my thoughts are,
how even your faintest of the gleam,
make my imagination spread like a beam.
If you will know,
what the scant of your appearance means to me,
you might still chose not to stay,
but you may leave behind
a smiling heart for me to treasure for a lifetime
Copyright Β© Shantanu Baruah
Wow beautiful!! I loved it β€οΈ
WOW… ππΌπππΌ
Thank you so much ππΈ
Thank you so much
Smiling heart ππππ
This is so beautiful π
And hopeful too.πΈ
Thank you, Jass
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Thank you so much, Amartya.
You are welcome! π
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This speaks volumes..
Thank you so much for your read
Loved the poem
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Excellent cadence and rhythmic structure. This is a beautiful piece.
Thank you so much
Aww.this is so beautiful..Is this the reason you are smiling always?
Haha. When does smiling needs reasoning ππ
haha not in your case..you know it charms people around you.
Lol. Thank you for your kindness. π