The storm you carry in your heart
bulging inside you over time
and when it goes over the brim
it explodes your soul into many pieces
shattered and dispersed
rattled and flustered
aghast and lost
but despite such turmoil
your eyes won’t show
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Very touching 🙂
Thank you so much, Neha ❤️
So many secrets the eyes hold♥️
True Sona. Thank you for commenting
Amazing words..!!! … eyes can’t hide their stories from the reading minds.. stuck in the last two line.. beautifully woven.. 👍🏼😇👌🏼
Thank you so much for your kind read
But those eyes gave away to you, as I see.
Haha. I like what you said 😊🌸
Thanks, But I see that you have a strong obsession with eyes. I though only I did this, but you surpass me too.
Haha. And here you are hiding behind a mirror. No chance to Read you 😜
Hahaha, nope!! not as yet. I have told you, may be some day.
I know mine will deceive me, just the second I open them 😀
Haha. No rush take your time. I was just teasing you 🌸😊
Hahaha, I got that :-p
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Heartfelt.. Amazing!! Happy friendship day dear neighbor! 😊🌸
Thank you Kranti. A very happy friendship day to you too 😊🌸
Eyes are great secret savers…
Ohh it is so beautiful..
Yes, they are. Thank you for commenting
Thank you so much 😊🌸
My pleasure
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Marvellous
Thank you so much
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my pleasure, Shantanu 🙂
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Beautiful play of words! Loved it!❤
Thank you, Rich
Eyes… fails to hide emotions always. All your amends to hide them are left in vain.
Very passionate and profound. Touched my heart deep. ❤😊
Thank you so much for your kind read, Anne
You’re always welcome. 🤗
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All the masks we wear!
I saw myself in these verses… Beautiful poem!
True. Well said. Thanks for stopping by
Thank you so much for your kind words. Thank you for such lovely compliment
You are very welcome!
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So beautiful and touching! 💙
Thank you so much
My pleasure!
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Such a contrasting poem to the fact that eyes are a window to our soul.Well penned,
Thank you. You noticed. I tried to write the opposite of what I always say 😊
Yup I did and I wrote it well.
Thank you so much dear
haha not dead yet
Oops my bad that is a typo
haha I know I’m just pulling your leg…somefree time on my hands
I just corrected it. I am so sorry
No worries yaar
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