The hollow laughs
are her charades put in disguise
the tears are often hidden
in her bruised heart
she is fighting hard to forget
all those moments of despair
and all those hopes that never survived
she is in a constant battle
with her ardent self
trying hard to fight her demons
to help forget her horrid past
and to love a new life
So, if you decide to hold her hands
and give her hope to bring her griefs
to a beautiful end
help her along one step at a time
be patient, stay calm
for she is building her castle
one brick at a time
Copyright ยฉ Shantanu Baruah
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This is so beautiful, you write so well
Yes he does. I also like the idea of having some words in “bold” to give it emphasis!
Touched.. This is sheer Love.. beautiful..!! I’m at loss of words now.. !!
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Everything you write is so beautiful that my comments will mean nothing one day.
I totally agree with you โ
Beautiful one dear ” be patient, be calm, for she’s building her castle, one brick at a time”.
Thank you so much, Reina. I appreciate the read.
Aww anytime Shantanu, happy to read
Thank you so much. You people are so kind. Thanks for liking the word emphasis.๐๐ธ
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Your comment means world to me. Thank you for all your support, Diana. I truly appreciate it โค๏ธ
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Thank you so much, OJ ๐๐ธโค๏ธ
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so gentle and kind! ๐
Thank you so much, Krishna
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Wonderfully penned!โค๏ธ
Thank you so much, Rich โค๏ธ
That’s a very strong poem. I love it
Thank you so much, Adithya
Beautiful lines and motivating one too๐๐
My pleasure
You’re welcome dear
Beautiful and a such a beautiful perspective for a healing heart.
Lovely.
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Thank you so much for your kind read
Thank you so much
My pleasure
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oh my goodness Shantanu….this is such a deeply moving piece…………
My pleasure.
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You’re utmost welcome! ๐
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