Her gleam prow out of her visage,
And her breath made a distinct thrum,
The opulence of her gilded sheen,
Made him appalled,
And enraged in unified hum.
For she consumed his senses,
Yet she was like vapor,
Filled with fragrance,
Displaying magical ardor,
But far from the view of his lenses.
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For she consumed his sense. That was perfect.
Loved the whole thing, but that first stanza was my favorite
Love it
lovely poem, brought me in 🙂
Thank you so much
Thank you so much, Norma
Simply wonderful 💕.
Thank you so much for your kind words
Beautiful! I was never a huge fan of poetry, so I don’t always appreciate it. But I am learning by reading your writings. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you so much Robin. I so appreciate your kind read despite of you not being a fan of poetry ❤️❤️
Beautiful 😍
Sry descriptive and vivid
Very descriptive and vivid
Thank you dear
Thank you so much
Seems like you are talking about a yacht or a boat.
Used it like a metaphor 😊🌸
Cool.
😊🌸
Shantanu – When I read this poem I was sitting watching rain mist. That experience helped me visualize this poem in a unique way and enhanced my reading of it. Such an elegantly written description. -Jill
Jill I so appreciate your kind read. Much humbled by your elegant description
You are most welcome, my friend.