From far she appeared jutting out her rough chides,
Impeding the world to dare and explore her wild side.
But I refused to give up and disregarded her all strife,
For I knew beyond the edges there existed an endearing love filledβlife.
Copyright Β© Shantanu Baruah
A lovely write, penned to explore behind the stifles of a love-life!
Thanks so much, Tanya
Great work, i enjoy the use of eclectic words that you use, I feel the need to use dictionary to find newer words
You are so kind. Your English is absolutely gorgeous too and I feel the same often
but I need to refer to discover words, I am too comfortable with what I know
We all are. I have a trick for that
what?
Such a beautiful poem π
Actually I wrote about it. I keep track of words when I read and use them in my writings. I will find the blog and will share with you soon. Thanks
Thanks so much, Jaya
My pleasure always
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that’s why you know…it’s you who deserved her endearing love π
Thanks for your beautiful comment ππΈ
An absolute delight to read for a few words saying it allππ»
Thanks so much for your kind read
Wow….lovely.
Thanks so much
Soooo lovely …Β I knew beyond theΒ edgesΒ there existed an endearing loveΒ filledβlife
Liked this one very much π
Thanks so much for your kind read
Inside a rough shell of an oyster a beautiful pearl resides…only Assayer can perceive!!
How beautifully you put it in words. Thanks so much for reading
My absolute pleasure dear neighbor! ππΈ
On a serious note I really appreciate you coming every day(or night?) and reading my work. Thanks so much for all the beautiful words. Much humbled
Please donβt say me thanks for this.. Your poems are so beautiful and meaningful..just keep giving me my sleeping dose πππ
So in other words you are saying my poems puts you to sleep π
ππ peaceful sleep!!
Haha. Thank you I will take that as a compliment. π
Indeed, I am giving you a compliment.. please accept it! π
You are adorable. Thank you πΈπΈ
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πΈπΉπ·ππΈπΌπ»πΊπ₯πππΎπβοΈπΏππππall of these and more. Thank you. Stay blessed
Haha.. this left me speechless.. God bless! πβ€οΈ
I am glad. Stay charming like you always do
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Well articulated
GreatππΌ
Thanks so much my friend
Thanks so much
You deserve kudos. Warm regards. Jay
You are so kind πΈπΈ