I expressed my deviant feelings
weaved in some frail thoughts
and set an ensemble
laced with some sacred smile
and in such viscous trice
I played my love chord
and soon my views became words
and I showed my verve
with renewed enthusiasm
but the question remains
will she have the courage to embrace my love?
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Beautiful
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Thanks so much
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Amazing poem, excellent choice of words. Now for acceptance, keep your fingers crossed!
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Thanks for your kind words 😊😊
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She will. Beautiful ❤️
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😊thanks for reading
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Get a very tasty bottle of wine and chill it. I think she will answer you in her own manner Shantanu !!
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Haha. This is just a figment of imagination my friend. And on top I am a teetotaler 😊😊thank you for reading
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You are welcome my friend. I am also a teetotaler. Just me and Ginger Ale and Root Beer ( Love A&W Root Beer )
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Aha this is so good to know
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You are thoughtful Shantanu !!
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🌸🌸stay happy my friend
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Yes, always my friend. Especially today on such a good Sunday Sabbath !!
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😊🌸
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Beautifully composed…lovely poem.👌👌
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Thanks so much, Madhusudan
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Love needs love 💕
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True my friend 😊😊🌸
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She will! Love always finds a way! 🙂
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Always my friend 😊😊
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If she reads this then she sure will 😍
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You are a sweetheart 😊😊thank you
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Beautiful!!!!!!!
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Thanks so much, Piyush
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The smile is sacred, verve is showed and renewed enthusiasm laced in love,who would say NO🤦
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Haha. Life is more complicated than the words. Thanks for your kind comment
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hmmmmmm
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I am sure she will have that courage 🙂
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Haha. Thank you for the read
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Lovely!
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Thanks so much.
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You’re welcome!
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Thanks so much
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You’re welcome.
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😊🌸
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Beautiful words and heart always knows.
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Thanks so much, Megha
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My pleasure
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😊🌸
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Sometimes showing no courage is best than showing but she will she will I pray
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You are very kind. Thank you
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Love bestows courage naturally.
So ‘she’ will surely have it
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Thanks so much for reading and leaving behind your beautiful comment
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Definitely she will..Your feelings are beautifully engraved in these lines..If she reads she will have to..Let the courage spark and see the wonders.😊
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Haha. Thanks for reading. I hope you know this is all fiction 😊😊
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Obviously, I read your son’s poetry..So I know that😊😊
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Haha. I want to make sure 🌸🌸thanks for reading
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Haha..Just enjoying sunday and doing some long comments..Just wanted to make that comment interesting.
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And it sure did. Thanks for your lovely comment 🌸🌸
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To me, this poem answers a big question…. you don’t know unless you try. -Jill
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You got the essence so right. Thanks for your read
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Wonderful poem. Thank you.
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😊🌸thanks again
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