Whenever I thought you are out of reach
never to become a reality,
and when I moved along with your memories
treasured deep in my heart
faraway into some oblivion
She decides to appear,
wearing her love drenched twinkling eyes,
and let me know what I mean to her life,
she will describe her love as deeper than I can ever imagine,
may not be the same way as I do
but it sure has its own shades of hue,
she will acknowledge
how temperamental, unpredictable and abstruse she is
and thank me for putting up to her pretentious trite
I may have thought ways to refute it in the past,
on my mind,
I might have played to refuse
her enticing demeanor many a time,
but when she appears with those heartening words
all my agitation, perturbation
dissolves in a whiff
and I cave in dissolving in her starlit talks,
and weave love drenched proses
describing my quivering thoughts,
I desire to share my deepest of feelings with her,
my desirous longing to embrace her,
I long to passionately kiss her lapel drenched lips
and yearn to keep her close so she can never leave
And as I will be on cloud nine thinking all of this
she retracts into some opaque
without any forewarning
and I remain alone and aloof
wondering which way should I proceed, should I wait for her to reappear
or should I collect my shattered being
and disappear in the darkness
thinking it was a plausible myth
I know deep within she also wants a share of my love,
but often she gets drown into some abyss of fear,
This time if you come
please think with a rational mind
for I don’t want much
just a tiny share of your world
but that little place
I will call it ours
shielding it and keeping it away
from any ostensible reach
And if you ever read this
promise me this
understand love is love
there exist no my version
or your version in this
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yes. there can be no version. i hope she reads. it’s beautifully beautiful straight from heart.
Thanks for your beautiful comment, Jay
This is beautiful!
Thanks so much Christy
Ahh!! The feel in this..Heartfelt lines. Love is love❤
Thanks so much for reading, Aditi
Heartfelt and beautiful, loved it.
Thank you so much, Tanya 🌸🌸
My absolute pleasure, very lovely indeed!
You are so kind to say that (err hot to say this) 😊
ha ha it was just a wit don’t pull my leg now besides the secret was to be for another women not me!
Lol. I am a quick learner. 😊
ha ha ha apply these secret on other women 🙂
😊🌸no offense my friend. Peace and harmony
🌸🌸🌺, blessings!
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Beautifully complicated love
Thanks so much Sakshi
It’s always a pleasure Shantanu
It’ll be a version that both of you compose together 🙂
Thank you
Beautiful words my friend. Thank you
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The feel of the poem is really amazing!
You made me tear up
Wow
Thanks so much for your kind words
Not that I want you too but this is the most beautiful comment I received. Thanks so much for your kind read
Thanks so much for your read
I don’t know how you took it but I literally teared up while reading this. I don’t know how you felt when you wrote this but I really did feel this.
You are a very good soul. Emotions are always deep my friend. Some to show, some to hide and some to simply express through write. The fact that you read my poem so beautifully had touched me in many ways. Thanks so much. ❤️❤️
The pleasure was absolutely mine.
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Some people are so great that they are above love wish I was like this
This was heartfelt and so warming to read. 💙
Thanks so much for your kind read
Always a pleasure to read! 😄
Thank you so much
You’re welcome, Shantanu!
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Thanks for your comment. This was in spam dear
Yeah, it is very obvious most things are not related to our lives and just wisdom or plain words anyway I took it as a piece
Thanks for your read
This is so beautiful.As you have said there is never various versions of love,it always exists in the simplest and purest form for people to decipher.It is us who makes it complicated by applying different rules to it.
This was one of your best , Shantanu
Thanks so much for such a beautiful comment. Much appreciate your kindness. Much humbled
I know you always say this is a figment of your imagination but this one I believe you have felt it deeply.
Haha. You and your aberrant thoughts 😊
I got my answer
Lol
Pleasure Sir!
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Applaudable 🙌 This is beyond praise. So beautiful… 💛💛
Feels like someone pouring out his heart. ❤️
Ahhh, This seems to be a little overpowering doesn’t it? Too close to home?? Something you can’t say no too? “Twinkling Eyes”?? Ha! The eyes always get you! Love the quote – “Eye contact – How souls catch fire”. Bravo, Shantanu!!!
Thanks so much for your kind read and words
Thanks so much for your kind read and leaving behind such beautiful words
So many versions my friend! Love is love, forever should always be the choice! Nicely written!
Thanks so much for your kind read, Warren
My absolute pleasure!
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“Just a tiny share of your world” I hope she gathers some courage and trust this call…
Beautiful
Thanks so much off your lovely read
I start reading on WP from your write ups only.. Thank you Infact for such lovely posts
That is such a lovely comment. I am so happy to learn that. Stay blessed
This is so beautifully written so incredibly transparent. Expression of true love and passion. A Forever Love that you shall both share.
Yonnie💜
InHisCare🙏
Thanks so much, Yonnie for leaving behind such a beautiful comment
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