18 thoughts on “Soot”

  1. Great lines .. ..forced me to think of another version……
    The soot on their eyes imperiously blurred their vision….. misconstruing the relics of her origin
    πŸ™ˆ Just felt like playing around with words

  2. how the damn. i almost stop breathing. i may need a dictionary to understand the meaning… but the emotions which I connect whenever I read… needs nothing.

    yes it needs more.. read and more and more

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