Great lines .. ..forced me to think of another version……
The soot on their eyes imperiously blurred their vision….. misconstruing the relics of her origin
π Just felt like playing around with words
Loved it. Thanks for adding your thoughts
It was truly a pleasure π
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Wow.. it’s beautiful.. βΊοΈππΌππΌ….
Thanks so much for your words
Yes, the soot maligns our soul too.
how the damn. i almost stop breathing. i may need a dictionary to understand the meaning… but the emotions which I connect whenever I read… needs nothing.
yes it needs more.. read and more and more
Thanks for your lovely comment
Thanks so much Jay for your lovely comment. Always appreciate your love towards my work
I need a thesaurus dear friend ππ€
You are too kind πβ€οΈ
Lovely sometimes soot can blur our true origins!
True my friend. Thanks so much for reading
Pleasure
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Great lines .. ..forced me to think of another version……
The soot on their eyes imperiously blurred their vision….. misconstruing the relics of her origin
π Just felt like playing around with words
Loved it. Thanks for adding your thoughts
It was truly a pleasure π
ππΈ
Wow.. it’s beautiful.. βΊοΈππΌππΌ….
Thanks so much for your words
Yes, the soot maligns our soul too.
how the damn. i almost stop breathing. i may need a dictionary to understand the meaning… but the emotions which I connect whenever I read… needs nothing.
yes it needs more.. read and more and more
Thanks for your lovely comment
Thanks so much Jay for your lovely comment. Always appreciate your love towards my work
You are welcome
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