It took time for me to reckon that in the process of gaining your attention I was losing my pride.
Copyright Β© Shantanu Baruah
It took time for me to reckon that in the process of gaining your attention I was losing my pride.
Copyright Β© Shantanu Baruah
Love is such a magic thing. It can make you do anything. I guess everyone is different. But personally, I’d rather lose my pride than lose my loved ones.
Beautiful thought and I am with you on that Graci. Thanks for your read and comment. Btw your prompt response and flower pictures on your site were too good
You are welcome Shantanu and thank you for the compliments.
My pleasure and thank you π
My heart is like a little puppy — what pride in love? π
Yeah perspectives. Thanks for your comment dear
Most welcome. Thank you for this opportunity to share. π
Such is love, our vices disappears in it’s embrace.
WOW.. too good.. so much said in so little words.. πππΌ
Welcome π
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kyaa khub likhaa hai…kam shabdon me bahut kuchh.
True Adithya. Thanks for commenting
Thanks so much for your kind words
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Much appreciate your words.
Ah, love is such a powerful thing!
It sure is my friend. Thanks so much of reading
This can be read both way..when you sacrifice your pride for the love of your life or when you sacrifice your self respect to please someone.Thats’ the beauty of this poem.
Thanks so much. It is a point of view of a frustrated heart π
That’s my point of view too.I read your comments from readers and that gave me another perspective.
It’s so endearing sometimes how people find love in such dire conditions too.
True my friend
A pleasure always!
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This is very cleverly written. I read it twice before I caught on that the narrator is playing a fool in order to catch someone’s attention. Well done! -Jill
You read my work so well. Ever grateful β€οΈ
You are most welcome my dear friend.
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