I usually don’t post my hindi compositions here. This is my second attempt. For my global friends I am including the English translation for easy read. Let me know your thoughts below. If you approve it, I will post more in the future. 🌸💛
See what your bereavement has done,
When we were together
I was just a speck of dust,
but now that you have left
a poet is what I have become.
देख तेरे इश्क़ का जोर
क्या से क्या बना दिया
जब साथ थे तब कहाँ मशहूर थे
जो बीचड़े तो शायर बना दिया
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wonderful writing…….the Hindi is so much prettier!
You’re amazing with both languages. I’d love to read more of your Hindi compositions though!😊
Hi Shantanu. Nice to be reading your writing again. Must say this is such a beautiful irony of life put into words. Short yet impactful. Lovely as always.
Lovely!
wow. this is amazing, Shantanu.
Wah Wah..that transformation had worked in our favor at least.
Are wah wah
, ishaq ka zor jo chala aap per
Kuch nahin To aapko Shayar Or Hume Shayari padhna agaaye
Thanks so much Wendi. Always a pleasure to hear from you
Thanks so much for your kind words. I will certainly post few in the coming days ❤️
Hey Graci. Lovely so see you back. Missed you. It being here. Thanks for all the adulations
Thanks so much, Christy
Thanks so much, Atifa
Haha. Thanks for your words
बहुत ख़ूब मेरे दोस्त
Too good …last two lines👌👌
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Thanks so much my friend
Amazing
Thanks so much, Adithya
Waahh wahh! Behad accha. You should write more of it 😊
Thanks so much my friend. Appreciate your comment
It’s always nice to read your writing Shantanu. Missed you too and the whole wordpress community and always my pleasure reading.
Wow.. that’s awesome.. the hindi version.. Shayri…
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Thanks so much Chiru
Loss of words again..!! ..just loving this piece.. 😇👌🏼👌🏼
Thanks so much. Do you understand Hindi
I am so glad to see you back. Love and blessings
Hahaha.. arey, yes yes, can speak, read, write and understand Hindi.. Living in a Hindi speaking state as well.. 👍🏼😁😁
Oh cool. Glad to know. 😊🌸
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You should post more in Hindi 😊
Haha. Will try. Thanks so much for the read
And we look forward to that 😊
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I don’t think I could ever depart myself from wp shantanu. This is my second home. Love and blessings.
Lovely to hear that. And glad you are back home
Wahh wah…Too good …..Hindi sometimes adds life to a thought…… looking forward to more of your Hindi poems
Thanks so much Sakshi.
My pleasure 😊
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Lovely!
Thanks so much my friend
My pleasure
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I think it is elegant and beautiful. Please keep sharing them. -Jill
Thanks so much for your kind words 🌸🌸
You are most welcome my friend!
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