From your vantage,
the solstice disappeared
in one blink of your eyes
But for me it lasted for an eternity,
waiting to see
a few shades of my yearnings
in the reflection of your eyes
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This is so beautiful
A good poem that opened my eyes about one person I knew who still is inside of me in that spot.
I love the title. There is something mysterious about Solstices, and this is a very different interpretation
Peaceful
Wow… What lines! Amazing. Have a good time
That longing, that waiting,,, Absolutely beautiful.
One of the most beautiful things I have read today
Thanks so much, Tracy
Thanks my friend for sharing
Thanks so much, Lorraine. Hope you are well
Thanks so much, Piyush
Thanks so much for your kind read
Thanks so much for leaving behind such beautiful footprints
You are so kind. Thanks so much for your lovely words
Pleasure was all mine
You are welcome my friend
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The pleasure was mine
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O WOW.. ‘ my yearnings in the reflection of your eyes ‘… The finishing stroke, a masterstroke.. amazing..!! 😇😇👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼
Thanks so much for your kind read. Truly humbled
Not to mention.. 😇😇
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Beautiful poem..the winter solstice has inspired a lot of us. I wrote one too.
Yes. Sure it did will read yours 😊🌸
Not posted yet.
Cool. Will wait
Will ping you whenever
That will be nice
Wow..It’s Beautiful.
Thanks so much, Aditi
This is a wonderful poem. I love how you have taken the light of the Winter Solstice to be reflection in one’s eyes. Very clever. -Jill
Thanks so much, my friend. This is a beautiful comment
You are most welcome my friend.
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