Dear friends. Here is another one of my Hindi poem. I have included an English translation as well. Let me know your thoughts
किया करते थे कभी जब तुम उन आँखों से बातें
लबों पे मुकम्मल वो हँसी कब बेज़ुबान था
दुपट्टे के कोनों मे भी एक कशिश थी बेसबब
दीलों के दहलीज़ के अदब थे बेमिसाल
और बस यूँ ही बीन कहे
बीन लबजों के सहारे लीए
हम मुहब्बत की आग़ोश में सीमट गए
I remember the days when you used to speak through your eyes
and that benign smile was never ever dearth of words
your aura had allure, a sense of desirousness smeared on it
the pull of heart was a mystical occult
and lost in that demeanor
without much rhyme or reason
and without support of any spoken verse
I got submerged in your love
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Lovely.
What a beautiful script. So elegant.
Thanks so much for your kind read
Wow.. This must be your second poem in Hindi right?
Loved the last line “Mohabbat ki aagosh me simat gaye”
Beautiful poem
I’m sure it is as beautiful in Hindi as it sounds in English, if not more for being in the original language.
Thanks so much for your kind read my friend
Beautiful
I have written a few. May be around 6. Thanks for reading
Thanks so much
Thanks so much my friend
U know hindi
I believe u r foreigner
Oh.. I ll have a look then.. I saw only two so far..
Last two lines…Jaan hee ley lee Janaab. Kaafi deadly poet
Its very very peaceful to read!
Wah -Wah
Aap mohabbat ke agosh main simat gaye
Hum sardi main kambal or rajai main simat gaye
Beautiful write – the ending is wonderful. 🙂
Mesmerizing.
Yeah. I know Hindi very well 😊
I live in the US but born and raised in India
No worries. Thanks for your time
Thanks so much, Jay. I truly appreciate your words and love ❤️❤️
You are so kind. Thank you
Wow. I get two red hearts….tarakki
Haha. Is it cold in Delhi?
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Thanks so much, Krishnapriya
Thanks so much, Graci
You are welcome Shantanu.
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How beautiful!!
Wonderful words…
Both ways it casts a spell!
Thanks so much, Kranti
Thanks so much, Fariha. Much humbled
Aww, this is so beautiful.. Shantanu, do a spoken word for this..really your readers can thanks me later.
वाह, वाह!
Ok
धन्यवाद दोस्त😊
Thanks so much, Megha. Let me give it a shot. ❤️
Yes, mission accomplished
Haha.wait till I write
Fingers crossed
स्वागत है, शान्तनु! 😊
You are too kind
हिन्दी में कुछ अलग मिठास है 🌸🌸
बिल्कुल। 🌺
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Omg just beautiful.
I don’t understand Hindi But the English version was fabulous
Your Hindi writings are just as amazing Shantanu.
Thanks so much for your kind words. Much humbled
And you are such a sweetheart. Thank you for all your adulations
Yes it is !
Lovely!
No escape then 😊
Nope
Thanks so much my friend
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😇👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼
Thanks so much
My pleasure
My pleasure.. 😊
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This is beautiful Shantanu😄
Thanks so much my dear friend
You’re welcome! 😄
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