Her mind was stark naked
transparent like an azure horizon
casting a prism of tincture,
a tinge of turquoise,
a shade of pewter
and scattered tone of crimson hue
And her eyes a deep blue ocean
holding many possibilities,
mystical like a hazy occult
in its illusionistic abyss
tempting to be deciphered
the uncalled coded rules
And I, like a lost soul
chasing a specter
waiting for my resurrection
by drowning into her devilish ravine
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Love the vivid colors and imagery you painted with your words. π
Another beautiful piece.. πππΌ
Lovely
Rich with imagery…liked the phrase uncalled coded rule, and the line scattered tone of crimson hue
A melody indeed! I am wondering if my mind can ever be stark naked, it is almost always overcrowded.
Wondefully expressed.
Thanks so much for your kind read my friend
Thanks so much, D
Thanks so much, Adithya
Thanks so much for reading so beautifully ππΈ
How wonderful it will be to untangle those labyrinth of overcrowded thoughts.
Thanks so much for your kind words
Simply because you write beautifully π
You are such a sweet person. Than you for being ever so kind
Thank you π
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Ooohhh…I like the way she makes you feel…π
Or maybe she likes the way you make her feel.
Or maybe no one is aware who is making who feel how ππΈ
Aaaah….I like this thought more. Interesting π
Love what u did with colors here.
Thanks so much π
Thanks so much. Much appreciate it
I know, right!! Even just thinking about how beautiful it would be, makes me giddy π
That makes us two. πΈπΈ
I love the use of colour in this poem. Beautiful. -Jill
Thank you dear Jill
You are most welcome my dear friend.
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