The other day I met someone
with your name
and all those suppressed emotions,
and disparage thoughts
came rummaging
through my bellowing chest,
escaping my vulnerable eyes,
displaying many shades of hue,
some turquoise,
few cerulean and
some blue,
exposing me to a point
where I was naked
my wounds afresh
and I stood there helpless
drenched in your sweet pain
Copyright ยฉ Shantanu Baruah
Hello… how are u .. just came for a quick follow up.. n was looking for ur write up.. n here u are..
I am good Deepti. So good to have you here. Where did u vanish ๐
It is the cold and the related bugs and viruses.. rest we have been just on annual leave ๐
How cool. Cold is brutal here too. Hope vacation was in a warmer place
Not so cold like USA thankfully.. yet not so likable.. the hols were good .. hope to be here more often ..
Cool. Have fun. And thanks for stopping by
This is beautiful. ๐ธ๐
Thanks so much my friend
It amazing that we feel close to even the name of the person we were close to. The epitome of proximity, that’s what passion in love is all about.Beautifullly written.
Thanks so much for such a beautiful read
This was a beautiful read.
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Beautiful as always
Lovely write.
Thank you for your kind read
Thanks so much dear Punam
My pleasure Shantanu.
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I can relate this… When I hear a name of a someone that reminds me of one close to me,.. That happens to me most of the time…
I am glad you could relate. Thanks for your comment
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Beautiful again ๐งก
Thanks so much Yasmin โค๏ธโค๏ธ
Always my pleasure, Shantanu๐๐ผ
Weird, isn’t it? How just a name can do so much?
True that my friend
Beautiful composition as always my friend.๐๐
Thanks so much, Madhusudan. I truly appreciate your thoughts
You are absolutely a great writer.
I am lucky that you are with me.
The feeling is absolutely mutual. You are a fabulous writer too. Great to meet you my friend
That mere name, Nice!
Thank you for your kind words
My absolute pleasure!
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I love this poem. It is beautifully written. And it is the perfect example how a name or word can create a deluge of emotion. -Jill
Thanks so much for your kind words
You are most welcome my dear friend.
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