You leave me strangled
in the midst of insanity,
somewhere between the love
and the pang of despair,
like the shades of crimson hue
mixed with the pewter in the evenfall
you leave me in between
deserting me to fall into an oblivion trap
Yet holding the tip of my dwindled hope
mind clouded in some gloom
I killed your thoughts many times
only to find you at a distance
smiling like a mirage
and now I know
you will always stay close troubling me
like an illusion
of some yesteryear’s yore
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Wow I love it
Lovely
The words you write are have always been uniquely beautiful. Your Poetic writing shifting. You seems to be venturing to new horizons, landscapes and expressions in many areas..lol.., Let me stop drifting Evenfall is brilliantly written.
This is stunning. Absolutely love it.
I love the illusion.
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Thank you so much, Sara
Thanks for reading and observing me so intricately. Much appreciate your presence ๐ธ๐โค๏ธ
Thanks so very much, Sonya
Thanks so much, Moushmi
Such a haunting and lovely tale of words my friend. You do it so well.๐น
Hmmmm
Thanks so much for lovely read – much Appreciate it
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Thanks so much for your kind read, Yasmin
Like it
Very welcome my friend.
Thanks so much
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Beautifully penned!
Thank you for your lovely comment
My pleasure!
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Beautifully written. How we try to distract ourselves from all the distraction built like a shining mirage it always catches our attention.
Thanks for getting the essence so beautifully