From a distance, one can see her diminutive stature,
gushing forward with determination,
a mark of a defiant soul
and despite her petite forbearance
she drapes in some vibrant turquoise shades
surge forward with hope in eyes
and confidence in her smiles
and all the biases the world presume is demolish
for she was a gushing stream no to be tamed
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“she was a gushing stream no to be tamed”……….oh my kind of person! love that line.
Love that ending.
You bring such wonderful colours into her defiant soul! Indeed she can never be tamed.
Thanks so much my friend for your beautiful read
Thanks so much for your kind read
Thanks so much, Moushmi
Definitely, The Comeback is always STRONGER than The Setback.
🙂 may your day bring you smiles! 🙂
Well said, Priya
To you as well thank you
🙂
The very last line! Well written as always, but that last line is going to be with me for the rest of the day.
You are such a kind soul, Diana. Than you
Love the way this poem ended👌
Thanks so much, my dear friend
I love this!❤️
Gushing stream… 👌
Thanks so much for your lovely read
Thanks so much dear Rich ❤️
You are welcome!
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The last line is amazing. A gushing unstoppable stream of grit and determination. How true.
Thanks so much my friend
Loved this one.
Thanks once again. Much humbled
You’re utmost welcome, Shantanu!
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