Adventures In Coraville Part 1 ๐Ÿงœโ€โ™€๏ธ

Come and read my 9 year old daughter fantasy story

Tenderquill

Deep in the ocean ๐ŸŒŠ, there was a mermaid named Hannah. She had long blonde hair, reaching her knee. The tip of her tail was bright blue while the rest of her tail was rose pink. According to her personality, those were the perfect colors for her.

The place where she lived was not that far away from the coral reef. Her house was a small den .It had a nice, comfy bed and a table that had fresh seafood and seaweed. She did not have to bring much food around with her when she left her house since there were many restaurants around her underwater town.

Aaron was the king of the seas. He told all the mermaids ๐Ÿงœโ€โ™€๏ธ in Coraville not to go up to the surface in case a human sees them. Aaron wanted all the mermaids to be a secret from the humans. Aaron became kingโ€ฆ

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34 thoughts on “Adventures In Coraville Part 1 ๐Ÿงœโ€โ™€๏ธ”

  1. This is so good.. Talented girl๐Ÿ‘โค๐Ÿ˜Š๐ŸŒป๐ŸŒป ..at the age of 9 I was busy in shaktimaan and doreman๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜…

  2. Your daughter is a lot like me at that age. I was forever writing stories. I especially loved writing about giants. I dont know why, I just found the concept of them fascinating. I bet she likes making things and drawing too. Generally story writers are very creative. Well, she’s gonna go far in life, you’ve got an amazing little girl on your hands. I can’t wait to read the second part of her story, lol. You need to keep your eye on her, she’s certainly giving you a run for your moneyโค

  3. This is such a beautiful comment. Thank you so much for leaving behind such a beautiful footprints ๐Ÿ‘ฃ. You are so right she loves drawing and everything creative. Stay blessed and beautiful ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•

  4. The pleasures all mine and ah, I told you so, I knew she was creative. Stay blessed and beautiful๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•

  5. So well done! She has a great imagination. The writing talent obviously runs in the family ๐Ÿ™‚

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