Her smile was beyond what adjectives or superlatives could define,
frail seance,
defiant aspirations,
and lost in her charm
he drowned in the abyss
of his miscreant desires,
ensorcelled in her mystic vibes
one wish at a time
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Reminds me of the song…डूबा डूबा रहता हूँ तेरी आँखों …by Silk Route.
This is my most favorite song. I keep singing it all the time lol
ah……the feelings after meeting “that one” 🙂 well don Shantanu!
Thanks so much, Wendi. Much appreciate it
you are very welcome.
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So full of feelings 💕
Thanks so much my dear friend
Beautiful lines for describing someone to make her feel special. Loved it.❤❤❤
Great! 😀
Thanks so much dear Richa. So now I know your name ❤️
Lol 😂
You are always welcome.❤ yes it’s very small name but its mine.❤❤
All of the feels! 💙
Such a sweet poem Shantanu!
It is a beautiful one ❤️😊
Thanks so much dear friend 💕
Thanks so much, Mona
Really. I had tried to change it whole of my childhood.❤❤❤ but thank you so much for your beautiful words it means a lot to me.
Why Richa is such a beautiful name. 🌸😊❤️
I don’t know may be because its a small name and i like a bit long names. But this situation was when i was in nursery. I like all the names of my friends except mine. My name’s meaning is bit puzzling not clear to me even today.
You’re welcome!
Richa in my opinion comes from the word Rachna- the epitome of beauty, the art of possibilities ❤️
Actually richa comes from word richaye(plural)which means a collection or group of all 4 Vedas. But still I don’t know the meaning of my name richa.♥♥♥ It’s really confusing
I took a wild guess lol. You are beautiful. That matters 😊
Thank you so much for your loving words.
My pleasure always
♥♥♥ that’s your beauty of your beautiful heart 💓
You are too kind, Richa. Stay like this forever ❤️
No iam not but I will try to become a kind person quite like you.♥♥♥
Who says you are not kind dear. 🌸😊 maybe you are in the wrong company 🌸
Honestly right now I don’t have any company of anyone from last 3 years. I think I should stare the mirror and try to find my kindness ♥♥♥ but thank you so much for your kind words it means a lot to me.♥♥♥
Why is that. You write so beautiful, you are compassionate, you always say beautiful words, who would not like to be your friend 🌸🌸don’t be disheartened. God has planned better things for you. Stay blessed
Thank you so much for your blessings.and I hope God has planned something for me too. But I have one friend I forgot to mention and that’s you. And don’t worry iam not disheartened at all .♥♥♥
I am always here. Richa. Anytime you need me I will be there. God has big plans for you. Mark my words. ❤️
Thank you so much for being right here. And I hope so let’s see what happens next to me (God’s plan ) ♥♥♥
All will be good 🌸🌸❤️❤️
Hope so. Thank you so much for your emotional support and kind words ♥♥♥
Stop thanking me, if you call me a friend. 😊
You are my friend and thanking for anything is in my blood I had tried hard to change but failed. ♥♥♥
Lol। that’s why I said you are kind 😊full circle
Being thank full is kindness??
Hey… there is no poetry without a muse… would like to be enlightened upon… but why ‘ seance’?
Of course. Only kind soul can be thankful. Again my perspective
I wanted to depict her as a mystical desire 😊
I like this pattern of writing in 3 phases… is it common … or you invented it…. can I use this… u know I have written a book… polished MS, Bio and synopsis yet to be finished… by end of June… is it a good idea to use in synopsis… the 3 phase pattern of writing
Thanks for reading. I just invented it. Feel free to use the pattern. I also wrote a book. Looking for a publisher.
Bio synopsis ready hai? U ll get better payment in your side of the world… what genre… I ll read… I wrote a children’s young adults fantasy ..tell me more? We are in the same boat… how did u start writing?
That is awesome. You can read more here https://ckonfab.com/thelastscintilla/
Ok. You and your words both are amazing.
I must say You have a great perspective.♥♥♥
Good work… mystery… suspense… well written… good luck … mine is around 9000 words. What made you write in the first place?
Cool. Well I always wanted to write a book. I was in Europe for a good part of my working career before and I thought of capturing it in some form. 🌸😊thanks for your interest. Much appreciate it
You are a sweetheart. Stay blessed dear ❤️ remember good only see good
seductive, nice one!
Thanks so much dear
most welcome!
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Sorry but I didn’t get the meaning of boy good.iam bit weak in English.♥♥♥
My bad. That was a typo. I corrected it
Loving it🤗
Thanks so much dear
Me too😊
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It’s ok. ♥♥♥
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Last two lines accentuate the beauty of the whole poem. Love it.
Thanks so much. You captured the essence really well
Amazing poetry! 💗
Tanks so much, Beckie
You’re most welcome!
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What lovely imagery and vibrant emotion your poem conjures!
Thanks so much, Jaya. I am so thrilled you liked it
ensorcelled in her mystic vibes
one wish at a time
I will relish this line for sometime
Thanks so much for reading so beautifully
This is extremely beautiful.
Thanks so much dear
You are certainly welcome
Such vivid imagery, a beautiful canvas.
Thanks so much for reading so beautifully
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You are most welcome
How is it going?
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Great. Returning today
That’s is great.
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Safe travels 😊
Thanks so much
You are certainly welcome
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What time is it there
missed you
It is 1:30 pm
I will soon get to all the post. Has been busy with work 😊
No!!!! You need to debrief.
I know you have been busy working. I know what it takes catching up. Thank You
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So amazing…
Is the whether still extremely hot
I do have a question
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Not so all. I find it fine
Sure
I understand know…I read your piece. Close 🚪. You have a cocoon as well.
That is great to hear. I was wondering if the heat
was still a challenge, as many lost their lives.
Haha. It is not me. Just a figment of imagination
Yeah. It is hot but I am mostly inside
Your enjoying this 🙂….
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Not you…haha 🤣
I do that too! So which parts are you…
Wait… I just cracked my self on that one. You in a cocoon…No
Lol. I am
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I am in Delhi
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I know so many people that go each twice a year. They love it.
I want to see it!
Why is that ? 🙃
Make a trip
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Yes, That is one ofvtv
Lol….😃😂Yes I plan to make a trip. I desire to travel there
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Lol 😂, I can’t my typo drift.
I really appreciate your responses. I know you must be busy. 😃😂